Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: The River Wild 07 Jan 2011 2:54 am
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    wow amazing and love wraith
    "You remind me of a fledgling phoenix, always having near-death experiences yet managing to rise above them and be reborn anew" Harry has been compared ot a phoenix many times both in the books sort of and by fanfic wirters and it so fits
Title: The River Wild 22 Sep 2008 6:25 pm
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    You might wish to amend the last sentence of the first paragraph here. Mushrooms are fungi, and nightshade is a family of green plants. (Besides deadly nightshade, it also includes "good" plants" tomatoes, and eggplant.)

    Maybe you could..."a harmless mushroom and its deadly cousin, amanita.

    Amanitas are the reason why there are no old, bold mushroom hunters. Several members of this group contain amanitin, one of the deadliest poisons found in nature. One cap of a Destroying Angel (Amanita virosa) can kill a man.
    (This last paragraph is from http://mdc.mo.gov/nathis/mushrooms/mushroom/poisonous.htm)

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'm not a real botanist by any means, I only know common vegetables and herbs for cooking and appreciate your advice.
Title: The River Wild 17 Sep 2008 2:41 am
Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm glad Severus came to the rescue on time. I wonder what Harry's punishment will be. I love this story. :)

    Author's Response: read the next chapter to find out! Thanks for R&Ring.
Title: The River Wild 16 Sep 2008 1:38 pm
Reviewer: gizmama (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful story! I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks and the next chapter's just been posted!
Title: The River Wild 16 Sep 2008 3:30 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter!

    I was really scared Harry was gonna die but then Wraith--sweet Wraith--saved him!! Yay!

    I loved the part with rellah helping Harry in the bath, that really cracked me up!

    And so did the part with little Sev and the exploding potion!
    Just wicked! 1000/10

    Author's Response: No, I'd never kill Harry!  So glad you liked this one! Wraith will always save Harry, except from himself, of course. 
Title: The River Wild 16 Sep 2008 3:27 am
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aww, I loved it! The nickname was cool and so was the part with the deer and the bear. And of course, Wraith was so awesome when he saved Harry from drowning. That kid! He'll never stop getting in trouble, will he? I've got a son just like him and I can relate perfectly to Severus.

    Author's Response: probably not!
Title: The River Wild 15 Sep 2008 10:53 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I have to say that Severus was a little responsible here. He has an active son who loves adventure and also has a tendency to break the rules.

    I knew Harry was going to give the canoe a try. Severus should have put a spell on it so that Harry couldn't touch - rather like we parents childproof our houses.

    I really like Eileen

    Author's Response:

    In hindsight, I'm sure Sev's kicking himself for not doing that.  But he wanted to give Harry a little freedom there in the glen, kind of like a man with a prize race horse, only Harry, like a typical headstrong Thoroughbred, took advantage and jumped the fence and bolted.  But he won't be doing anything like that again soon, for now Severus is going to tighten the leash again. 

    Eileen is quite the character, isn't she?

Title: The River Wild 15 Sep 2008 10:21 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ::grins::

    Yep. Another one.

    Just had a thought.

    Is Harry going to wake up with Wraith over him? You should do it you know!

    Ok, ::waves like a moron::

    Byebye!

    Author's Response: You never know!  Wait and see!
Title: The River Wild 15 Sep 2008 10:14 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ::grins like a mad idiot::

    I LOVE YOU SNAPEGIRL!!!

    Wraith! You added Wraith! Wonderful, glorious, Wraith! ::shrieks:: I love the overprotective snowleopard! ::grins:: Ok, you probably think I'm crazy now but that's ok.

    ::cackles:: I loved this chapter. Truly loved it! My favourite one so far!

    Ooh, as for Harry's Animagus form... ::grins and winks:: I made the mistake with Severus but I'm going to offer a suggestion as well as guess. Why not make him a large cat like his father? ::grins weakly:: I've always loved that idea. ::shrugs:: It's your story and you know how much I'll love it.

    Byesies for now,
    All my love,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    Wraith's awesome, I love him too! I want to hug him!  But I want to hug Sev too . . .boy do I want that!

    That's a good idea for Harry's Animagus form.  Thanks!

Title: The River Wild 15 Sep 2008 7:58 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter, sev will be needing heart surgery soon to help his poor weary heart, how much more can he take?
    harry needs to curb his impulsiveness and think before he acts

    Author's Response: Got that right! Poor guy . . .Harry does really need to get a handle on his impulsive streak, which Severus will stress to him once more next chapter.

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