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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Spirit Kin 18 Sep 2008 4:06 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Whisper is awesome. Whisper and Wraith! It was hilarious when Harry realized he was naked in the garden! I could picture him pumping his fist in the air one moment and running into the house the next. Great job. I look for your story and any updates every night.

    Author's Response:

    That part wasn't even planned, until a little Snape-like voice whispered *no pun intended* to me, if he changes back, he'll be naked because he left his clothes behind and suddenly I could just hear Severus saying that and I laughed hysterically.  You'll be seeing a lot more of Whisper and Wraith in the next chapter and there will be a surprise as well.

Title: Spirit Kin 17 Sep 2008 4:08 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    yes! he's a snow leopard! i love it!

    Author's Response: Course he is! it just seemed perfect! BTW, I can start betaing your stuff again!
Title: Spirit Kin 17 Sep 2008 3:17 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    This was PERFECT! I love it that Harry is a cub rather than a full grown leopard. You have his mannerisms and attitude so perfect that I'm still grinning about it. When I read the bit where he tried to catch the mouse, it reminded me of when my Bengal kitten was learning to pounce and grab his toy mouse. So besides enjoying a very good chapter I also got to reminisce about something else that made me smile. Thanks.

    Author's Response: Awww, I love kittens and always wanted a Bengal.  They look so cool.  I had plenty of cats, my last one died three years ago and I haven't yet gotten another, but someday I will.  I still remember when my Magik was a kitten, she was so cute and funny! Whisper is based upon her.  I had fun writing about him and I used to wish I was a cat when I was little, LOL!
Title: Spirit Kin 17 Sep 2008 12:15 am
Reviewer: Mila (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Harry's animagus form is a cutie, I love it.
    Just a tiny little but: Not eating three days would be harder than you let it be, even if Harry had to go through it before at Dursleys. Plus, Severus shouldn't allow to let him go hungry for so long, especially so soon after being sick. Sorry about picking on details. Not a big deal.
    I really like this fanfic! Little-sun

    Author's Response: Probably it would, but Harry's used to self-deprivation, and Severus had to let him fast, it was a requirement of the ritual of finding your Animagus, a way to purify yourself to recieve the spirit form.  And Harry had recovered from his sickness three weeks prior to attempting his Animagus quest, he had week of doing his punishment and then another two weeks of studying with Sev, so he wasn't putting his health at risk.  I don't mind if you ask me things, it shows you're paying attention.  *two thumbs up!*
Title: Spirit Kin 17 Sep 2008 12:02 am
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like the imagery in this chappie, well done. Especially with Snape watching over Harry whilst sick. Makes want a snow leopard of my own.

    Author's Response: I want one too! Too bad I could never have one.  Oh well . . .that's why i write stories.  I love when Sev watches Harry sleep, it's so sweet and paternal. 
Title: Spirit Kin 16 Sep 2008 10:57 pm
Reviewer: jcmsheltie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome story!!! I love it. I don'e usually review but thought you deserved it. This is one of(if not the) best Snape/Harry son/guardine fics out there. Keep up the good work. I really love that you made his form the some as Sev's.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful compliment! *blushes*  I had to make them the same animal, it just felt right.  Please keep reading!
Title: Spirit Kin 16 Sep 2008 10:16 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ::shrieks::

    You did it! ::cackles:: A snow leopard and his cub! Brilliant. Brilliant. BRILLIANT! I love it, Snapegirl. Love, love, love, love, love, love, love, LOVE IT!!!!!

    Ok you /have/ to do more Wraith and Whisper! I loved the interaction between father and son. As I said, it was brilliant.

    Think of a wonderful compliment and believe I wrote it! There! That should suffice.

    Ok. Go write more. NOW WOMAN! I'm DESPERATE!

    ::grins::

    Love ya!

    ::winks::

    Author's Response:

    Aren't they sweet?

     

    I'm typing away here, y'know!

    And there will be more Wraith and Whisper next chapter.

Title: Spirit Kin 16 Sep 2008 9:45 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love that harry is a snow leopard too! its so sweet that they are spirit kin : ) great chapter!

    Author's Response: Yay! I wanted to make them alike, to show that they have a deep connection that's not from blood. 
Title: Spirit Kin 16 Sep 2008 7:50 pm
Reviewer: caro (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh I totally love this fic, I get so excited when you update!! I love your descriptions of that place, very vivid!

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'm very excited about it as well!
Title: Spirit Kin 16 Sep 2008 7:08 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, how embarrassing; starkers in the middle of the garden!

    Wasn't it kind of dangerous to send Harry out by himself in the woods by himeself; even to discover his animagus form?

    I just love when Wraith washes Whisper; or rather Harry--how cute!

    I just knew that he would be a cub! Got the warm fuzzies again; stop doing that! Just joking -- I LOVE warm fuzzies! ;)

    Author's Response:

    Whoever said he was alone?

    Remember, Wraith came up from behind him on the porch. 

    I had to make him a snow leopard too, it was just too cute to resist.


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