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Reviews For Arms of a Dark Angel
Author's Response: That part wasn't even planned, until a little Snape-like voice whispered *no pun intended* to me, if he changes back, he'll be naked because he left his clothes behind and suddenly I could just hear Severus saying that and I laughed hysterically. You'll be seeing a lot more of Whisper and Wraith in the next chapter and there will be a surprise as well.
Author's Response: Course he is! it just seemed perfect! BTW, I can start betaing your stuff again!
Author's Response: Awww, I love kittens and always wanted a Bengal. They look so cool. I had plenty of cats, my last one died three years ago and I haven't yet gotten another, but someday I will. I still remember when my Magik was a kitten, she was so cute and funny! Whisper is based upon her. I had fun writing about him and I used to wish I was a cat when I was little, LOL!
Just a tiny little but: Not eating three days would be harder than you let it be, even if Harry had to go through it before at Dursleys. Plus, Severus shouldn't allow to let him go hungry for so long, especially so soon after being sick. Sorry about picking on details. Not a big deal. I really like this fanfic! Little-sun Author's Response: Probably it would, but Harry's used to self-deprivation, and Severus had to let him fast, it was a requirement of the ritual of finding your Animagus, a way to purify yourself to recieve the spirit form. And Harry had recovered from his sickness three weeks prior to attempting his Animagus quest, he had week of doing his punishment and then another two weeks of studying with Sev, so he wasn't putting his health at risk. I don't mind if you ask me things, it shows you're paying attention. *two thumbs up!*
Author's Response: I want one too! Too bad I could never have one. Oh well . . .that's why i write stories. I love when Sev watches Harry sleep, it's so sweet and paternal.
Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful compliment! *blushes* I had to make them the same animal, it just felt right. Please keep reading!
You did it! ::cackles:: A snow leopard and his cub! Brilliant. Brilliant. BRILLIANT! I love it, Snapegirl. Love, love, love, love, love, love, love, LOVE IT!!!!! Ok you /have/ to do more Wraith and Whisper! I loved the interaction between father and son. As I said, it was brilliant. Think of a wonderful compliment and believe I wrote it! There! That should suffice. Ok. Go write more. NOW WOMAN! I'm DESPERATE! ::grins:: Love ya! ::winks:: Author's Response: Aren't they sweet?
I'm typing away here, y'know! And there will be more Wraith and Whisper next chapter.
Author's Response: Yay! I wanted to make them alike, to show that they have a deep connection that's not from blood.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm very excited about it as well!
Wasn't it kind of dangerous to send Harry out by himself in the woods by himeself; even to discover his animagus form? I just love when Wraith washes Whisper; or rather Harry--how cute! I just knew that he would be a cub! Got the warm fuzzies again; stop doing that! Just joking -- I LOVE warm fuzzies! ;) Author's Response: Whoever said he was alone? Remember, Wraith came up from behind him on the porch. I had to make him a snow leopard too, it was just too cute to resist. |
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