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Title: Practice Makes Perfect 07 Jan 2011 3:53 am
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    awww wraith and Whisper are so adorable and I want to pet Whisper

    and alot explains the relationship Sev and McGonagall have that is for sure
Title: Practice Makes Perfect 20 Sep 2008 12:55 am
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    I just love little Whisper he is just too cute...running after squirrels and pouncing on mice he is just adorable. I am so happy to see Harry in the form of Whisper having fun like a little child so innocent, when I consider the childhood he actually had, this time is like a real healing being Whisper has healed the child of so much ills – he can just be a child happy and carefree

    Author's Response: You're absolutely right.  Being an Animagus is very beneficial to Harry as it was for Severus as well.  Neither of them had happy childhoods and being a leopard cub was like gaining a second childhood in a way.
Title: Practice Makes Perfect 19 Sep 2008 11:38 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    wow harry is certainly getting used to his form and loving all of his antics as whisper, i had a cat once that got stuck up a tree, when i read that whisper did i had to smile.

    Author's Response: Yes, he's adapting nicely.  I hope you got your cat down without too much trouble, I was lucky, mine always knew how to get down.
Title: Practice Makes Perfect 19 Sep 2008 6:47 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    I LOVE this chapterz! it totaly rocked!

    Author's Response: Thanks and just wait till you find out what happens next.
Title: Practice Makes Perfect 19 Sep 2008 4:34 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    This was an absolute treat! I just love the way Wraith and Whisper interact with each other. I wish I was an animagus so I could join them! Hugs! And thanks for such a great chapter.

    Author's Response: So do I! I'd love to be able to become a cat or a dog or a wolf or something like that.  :)
Title: Practice Makes Perfect 19 Sep 2008 3:55 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah! I love nice, long, satisfying fluffy chapters of Wraith and Whisper. I think they're a hit:)
    I'm enjoying Severus' knowledge of healing. The detail in your story has been phenomenal. Thanks!

    Author's Response: Thank you too.  I try really hard to capture the way the leopards feel and think so you can understand how it would be to become one.  More Wraith and Whisper will be coming up!
Title: Practice Makes Perfect 19 Sep 2008 1:52 am
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I laughed so hard when I read the part where the cub jumped on Wraith's head! What an awesome chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Practice Makes Perfect 19 Sep 2008 1:50 am
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved when you described the price all Animagi must pay to change shape, it makes sense and I like how it's not easy the way it looks. The way the two

    Author's Response: Yes, i didn't want it to be easy, since nothing worth doing ever is.
Title: Practice Makes Perfect 19 Sep 2008 1:46 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved when Wraith and Whisper played together it reminded me of my own cat with her kittens. Aww! Sweet chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks, you made my day!
Title: Practice Makes Perfect 18 Sep 2008 11:51 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    . . .

    What to say? I see that I am the only one who has still not reviewed. A remedy I am currently fixing! ::claps hands together:: Let's start this!

    The interaction between Wraith and Whisper was down pact. I've been doing a lot of research lately on big cats - simple curiosity and your story has given an idea of my own - and the way the two are acting towards each other is very realistic of the cats in the real world.

    Have you thought about writing a sequel with my, er, suggested idea? ::quietly:: I've told you I won't be offended if you say no but I think it would be neat. I don't have the patience to play with J. K. Rowling's characters right now. So, ::bows:: I shall leave that up to you and throw out suggestions or ideas when they hit me. And, if it appeals to you to, hopefully you'll use 'em. ::grins::

    I'm curious about the 'unexpected something' coming up in the next chapter. Does it have to do with a character of the HP world or one of your magnificent Originals?

    - by the way, Ebony is a beautiful character. I simply adore the onyx fox.

    All right my darling, I shall take my leave for now.

    Update soon and I am very eager to see what the sequel is. Truly.

    Love,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response: I shall indeed and I thank you for them.  I need inspiration.  I based a lot of my cat parts on the way my own cats used to act with each other and from watching all these nature shows, I love them.  Ebony will return in the next chapter as will the fox kits.  And the unexpected something will be revealed then also . . . see ya!

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