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Title: Wyvern Attack 23 Sep 2008 1:54 am
Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story. I'm glad Severus came back calmer and that nobody was the victim of the wyvern. I hope Boreal can fly again, he shouldn't die. I think Harry should be punished... grounding is a good idea

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot.  This story is one of my favorite ones that I've written.  I've noted your punishment down, several others have suggested the same.  Read the next chapter to see what happens to Boreal!
Title: Wyvern Attack 22 Sep 2008 1:03 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter, harry was very brave and couragous as instead of running away he helped save the flying horse from the wyvern and should be commended.

    as for the punishment, before this chapter i was thinking severus should be quite harsh but harry saved severuses life and his punishment should be reduced because of this.

    i hope severus manages to save the winged horses wings

    Author's Response: Yes, i agree and you can see what happens to Boreal in the next chapter.
Title: Wyvern Attack 21 Sep 2008 2:12 pm
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    AWESOME!!

    Loved it!!

    Hurry up and update, I can't wait to see what happens!!

    Author's Response: Thanks, and I have!
Title: Wyvern Attack 21 Sep 2008 2:11 pm
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I was really scared!!

    So glad nobody died--thank you!

    Harry's been punished enough, I think.

    Great work! Post soon!!

    Author's Response:

    Except the wyvern.

    Ok your opinion has been noted, now go and read the next chapter.

Title: Wyvern Attack 21 Sep 2008 2:10 pm
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    HOLY GOD!!
    I was on the edge of my chair here!
    Great battle and I'm glad they all survived.
    Harry's reaction after was normal, let Sev take that into account when punishing him.

    Loved Boreal, save him Sev!

    Author's Response: I'd never kill off my favorite characters! Read the next chapter to see if Sev saves Boreal.
Title: Wyvern Attack 21 Sep 2008 2:07 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh brilliant chapter! All of them are a force to be reckoned with! Severus should ground Harry from his Animagus form. Please save Boreal, I love him!

    Author's Response: yes they are and I'll take that punishment into account, thanks for the suggestion.  Read on to see what happens to Boreal.
Title: Wyvern Attack 21 Sep 2008 2:05 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow that was intense! Please don't let Boreal die! He is brilliant. And Severus should use the first punishment he was thinking about in the forest, it's a good one.

    Author's Response: Okay, I'll take that into account.  Boreal's fate is revealed in the next chapter.
Title: Wyvern Attack 21 Sep 2008 1:29 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Keeping a child from doing what they love but don't need is a sure deterrent. I vote for grounding from the animagus form (even though I love Whisper and Wraith). Maybe he also has to feed and water Boreal as he recovers:) Thanks for the great updates.

    Author's Response: Yes, that's a good idea.  Boreal will need a lot of care over the next week or two.  Thanks for the reviews!
Title: Wyvern Attack 21 Sep 2008 12:20 am
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Now that I'm awake and alert, here is my promised review.

    After thinking about it, I must say that Harry should get off lighter than two weeks if you must punish him. Being frightened to death and nearly killed should have taught him what Severus was trying to - in fact, the wyvern did a very good job of that.

    Boreal, as with all your characters, is round and original and I enjoy reading about him. The bit with Rellah was well done as well. I like the little wood sprite.

    Does this mean there will be no Wraith and Whisper next chapter?

    Love,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response: I'd agree, Severus might be inclined to be lenient with Harry considering what nearly happened.  Boreal will play a major role in upcoming chapters.  Wraith and Whisper will return, but not for awhile.  The duration of Harry's grounding, at least.
Title: Wyvern Attack 20 Sep 2008 6:00 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    boreal sound like a good character, i love the way harry believes sev can do anything, it shows such faith : )

    Author's Response: Yes, Harry worships Sev, since the man has saved his hide so often.  Boreal is an important character, as you'll see.

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