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Reviews For Arms of a Dark Angel
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. This story is one of my favorite ones that I've written. I've noted your punishment down, several others have suggested the same. Read the next chapter to see what happens to Boreal!
as for the punishment, before this chapter i was thinking severus should be quite harsh but harry saved severuses life and his punishment should be reduced because of this. i hope severus manages to save the winged horses wings Author's Response: Yes, i agree and you can see what happens to Boreal in the next chapter.
Loved it!! Hurry up and update, I can't wait to see what happens!! Author's Response: Thanks, and I have!
So glad nobody died--thank you! Harry's been punished enough, I think. Great work! Post soon!! Author's Response: Except the wyvern. Ok your opinion has been noted, now go and read the next chapter.
I was on the edge of my chair here! Great battle and I'm glad they all survived. Harry's reaction after was normal, let Sev take that into account when punishing him. Loved Boreal, save him Sev! Author's Response: I'd never kill off my favorite characters! Read the next chapter to see if Sev saves Boreal.
Author's Response: yes they are and I'll take that punishment into account, thanks for the suggestion. Read on to see what happens to Boreal.
Author's Response: Okay, I'll take that into account. Boreal's fate is revealed in the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yes, that's a good idea. Boreal will need a lot of care over the next week or two. Thanks for the reviews!
After thinking about it, I must say that Harry should get off lighter than two weeks if you must punish him. Being frightened to death and nearly killed should have taught him what Severus was trying to - in fact, the wyvern did a very good job of that. Boreal, as with all your characters, is round and original and I enjoy reading about him. The bit with Rellah was well done as well. I like the little wood sprite. Does this mean there will be no Wraith and Whisper next chapter? Love, Jewels. Author's Response: I'd agree, Severus might be inclined to be lenient with Harry considering what nearly happened. Boreal will play a major role in upcoming chapters. Wraith and Whisper will return, but not for awhile. The duration of Harry's grounding, at least.
Author's Response: Yes, Harry worships Sev, since the man has saved his hide so often. Boreal is an important character, as you'll see. |
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