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Title: Wyvern Attack 20 Sep 2008 4:04 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    My stomach is in knots; what an intense scene! Harry is turning out to be a powerful wizard; isn't he? Severus will have to teach him control though.

    I think that grounding Harry from becoming an animagus for two weeks is perfect--let the punishment fit the crime!
    I think that as much as Harry loves to become Whisper; it would make him think twice before leaping into danger without thinking and about disobeying Severus again.

    Oh, and I think that scrubbing a few cauldrons always gives one time to regret one's trangressions; don't you think?

    Author's Response:

    He is indeed, and Severus will have to step up his lessons on control a notch.

    I am seriously considering that punishment as the best course of action, and scrubbing a few cauldrons for reflection too and perhaps helping with Boreal too. 

Title: Wyvern Attack 20 Sep 2008 2:50 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like the punishment you came up with.

    I'm sorry, this review is short but it's early in the morning and I'm still tired and half awake.

    I very much liked this chapter. I can't wait to see what you do in the next. So does that mean there's no Whisper and Wraith? ::pouts and winks:: That's ok.

    Update soon, dear.

    Love,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response: Well, not for right now! I should be posting a new one shortly!
Title: Wyvern Attack 20 Sep 2008 7:55 am
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. Nice way to introuce the horse and keep it

    Author's Response: Thanks and I hope you like the next one.
Title: Wyvern Attack 20 Sep 2008 7:48 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    seriously, i think the boy has suffered enough with having the crap scared out of him...i think he has made up for any dissobediance....

    i hope he can save Boreal...he's magnificent!

    Author's Response: Okay, I was kind of thinking that myself, so maybe Sev should go easy on him this time.  Glad you like Boreal.

    Author's Response: Okay, I was kind of thinking that myself, so maybe Sev should go easy on him this time.  Glad you like Boreal.
Title: Wyvern Attack 20 Sep 2008 5:21 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderful, thank you for not making us wait.

    Author's Response: You're quite welcome! Thanks for reviewing!

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