Potions and Snitches
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Title: Consequences & Conversations 23 Sep 2008 10:35 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww that was really sweet and I loved the way you described the pegasus breeds and Sev as a little boy! Too cute, not to mention hilarious!

    Author's Response: Great and I hope you enjoy the next chapter.
Title: Consequences & Conversations 23 Sep 2008 10:33 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Taking care of a horse is hard work, but necessary. I loved all the conversations, especially Eileen's with young Severus and Lily, it was funny!

    I hope Snape will let Ron & Hermione visit.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, it is, I have a friedn who owns a horse and she spends hours with it, grooming, feeding, mucking out. and riding.  I enjoyed writing young Sev and Lily.

Title: Consequences & Conversations 23 Sep 2008 5:52 pm
Reviewer: kittykat91419 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, that was a quick update! I hope Boreal will stick around and continue to be an influence in the story. I also really like the insight Eileen provides into Severus's childhood. I have a hard time imagining the Potions Master blowing up his cauldrons as a youngster, but everyone has to start learning somewhere! Truthfully, I think it's the way JKR wrote Severus. She didn't give him much of a childhood, and what she did tell made it difficult to see him as being anything other than what he was.

    In response to your response to my last review: I can't believe that someone could do stitches like that on their own child so efficiently! Wow! I know some doctors do really well with stitched, but the guy who did mine, well, I don't know if he messed up removing the mole or what, but after I got the stitches out (and I waited longer than I was supposed to, as well) the area split open again. That was a mess.

    Author's Response:

    yes, and if JKR had given us more than a glimpse into Snape's childhood, we might understand him a bit better.  You'll note that Eileen does say that Sev was a very good potion make even then, but he was not perfect and it's easy to make mistakes when you're experimenting. 

    My sister is amazing, everyone wants her as their OBGYN, no joke, her waiting list for new patients is 6 months.

    Never got a mole removed, but after hearing that I don't think I want to.

Title: Consequences & Conversations 23 Sep 2008 3:52 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I always wanted to ride a pegasus. I guess a hippogriff would be closest thing to one.

    So, Hermione's parents didn't learn about her idiotic --cough -- heroic adventages at the end of school. Too bad. At least, Molly was able to let Ron know about her opinion of 11 year olds going after mass murderers.

    Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: So do I.  No, Hermione's parents don't know about what happened, but Hermione got lectured and punished by someone, and you'll find out about that later.  Molly has very definite opinions about the things her son should be doing and Ron knows that.
Title: Consequences & Conversations 23 Sep 2008 3:51 pm
Reviewer: felissiana (Signed) [Report This]
    keep up the good work

    Author's Response: Thanks! Please keep reading.
Title: Consequences & Conversations 23 Sep 2008 3:07 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    The last three Chapters have been quite good. Well done! I really like Boreal, and can possibly see where you are going with this character - hope you do.

    Author's Response: Thanks and I am going to do a lot more with Boreal, he's going to be a friend to Harry.  Great job on your story too, I've just reviewed it!
Title: Consequences & Conversations 23 Sep 2008 12:58 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Mmm, chocolate--who can resist!

    I'm so glad that you updated so quickly.

    I hope that Severus agree to Harry having Hermione and Ron over; after all, Harry has never had a proper birthday party--has he?

    Author's Response: No, he never has and Severus knows that and would like to make this one quite memorable.  Of course, Rellah and Eileen can give him some ideas.
Title: Consequences & Conversations 23 Sep 2008 12:18 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    snape finding his inner child *chuckle* it would be funny to see his reaction to such a suggestion! i liked the part with eileen talking about little sev and lily : )

    Author's Response: Wouldn't it though! Eileen's reminscence was pretty funny, especially when you consider the disciplinarian he is now!

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