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Title: Birthday Surprises 28 Sep 2008 3:57 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ooh...

    Greatly looking forward to the next chapter. It's rare for Harry and Ron to fight and I love it. Poor Boreal, he must have been greatly annoyed with allowing the other two to ride him; although I don't think he minded Hermione riding him too much. You're his creator, you know him better than I do.

    Harry's birthday was sweet and fluffy and I enjoyed every freakin' minute of it! ::grins::

    Update soon my dear.

    Love ya! ::winks::

    Author's Response:

    They'll have quite a loud fight, but not a physical one, just words, which is probably worse.

    Boreal was a little annoyed, but since they were Harry's friends he made an exception.  He would do the same for Severus or one of Harry's kids, if Harry has them someday!

Title: Birthday Surprises 28 Sep 2008 12:39 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    what a sweet gift from severus, i cant imagine harry is going to be too pleased when ron accuses him of having a charmed life! imagine if he knew about his animagus form too lol : )

    Author's Response: yeah, Sev does have his moments.  And Harry is going to be furious when Ron comes out with that little gem! Ron would probably explode if he ever knew Harry was an Animagus.
Title: Birthday Surprises 28 Sep 2008 7:34 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    as always....wonderful

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Birthday Surprises 28 Sep 2008 6:06 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    love the foreshadowing...

    When Ron explodes....everyone better watch out!

    Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Yeah, that's for sure! Or Harry, both of them have mean tempers.
Title: Birthday Surprises 28 Sep 2008 5:58 am
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry had such a wonderful time I am so happy that he could be a normal child and celebrate his birthday. Sev's gift is amazing and for Harry it would provide him with some great memories.
    Ron is a prat and is becoming an even bigger prat than before... I am glad that Harry did not notice his jealousy to spoil the party. Jealousy and Envy are two of the seven deadly sins and Ron is falling big-time; while Hermione can begin to see Sev like her “Hogwarts dad”, Ron just doesn’t have the maturity or the heart to appreciate anyone other than himself, Ron is proving to be no kind of friend at all.

    Author's Response: You'll see the Pensieve memories in a few chapters, it'll be really emotional.  Ron . . .he is very immature here and has a good deal of growing up to do. His jealousy blinds him to the truth. His envy is going to come back and bite him in the ass, as you'll see, and then perhaps he'll learn something.  Hermione has always been able to see behind masks and has always known that Severus was more than what he seemed, she is intuitive as well as book-smart. 
Title: Birthday Surprises 28 Sep 2008 5:55 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, Ron will always be jealous. I foresee rough waters ahead, my captain.

    Author's Response: Until he gets good whack upside the head! And there will be squalls aplenty next chapter!
Title: Birthday Surprises 28 Sep 2008 5:32 am
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh, oh, jealous Ron - that red hair will always get him into those hot spirits! Let's see how fast he holds a grudge in your piece!

    Author's Response: yes it will and it might not be a slong as you think! You'll see!

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