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Title: A Very Pointed Object Lesson 17 Mar 2010 7:07 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Does Severus really want to talk to her about the essay, or is he just getting keeping her occupied?
Title: A Very Pointed Object Lesson 02 Oct 2008 3:13 am
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    The glen punished Ron and he feels guilty, at least now he would grow up a bit and become a better person and a better friend to both Harry and Hermione.
    Sev has found himself another imp to be guardian to. The golden trio are now in his care.
    Has Hermione figured out that Sev is Uncle Toby as yet?

    Author's Response: Yes, he now realises the error of his ways and will continue to think about it when Harry speaks to him as well. And yes, now Sev has another child to guard and protect, the poor man! Yes, Hermione knows about Uncle Toby, Harry told them everything when Snape adopted him.  It wasn't mentioned, I know, but they do know Snape's alias.
Title: A Very Pointed Object Lesson 01 Oct 2008 11:00 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    My promised review.

    I'm sorry it took so long.

    It was very good. Ron showed true remorse when he cried on Severus' lap. I hope the damage is not irrepairable; Harry needs to know that he has friends he can count on. Even though he wants to be normal, he never will, not even after the defeat of Voldemort. The most important thing is that he has his father, Boreal and his friends.

    I hope Harry does forgive Ron.

    A surprise visitor: I believe it's Dumbledore. He affects all three of them not just one or the other. Boreal's owner would perhaps have an impact on all three of them too.

    Update soon, my dear.

    I'm greatly looking foward to more.

    Love ya!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, that really is the most important thing and he will eventually forgive Ron, as you'll see in the next chapter.

    As for the surprise visitor....you'll see!

    *waves*

    See ya!

Title: A Very Pointed Object Lesson 01 Oct 2008 8:33 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    wow you nearly got a blank review as i pressed submit by accident.

    great chapter, but i wonder if severus would of healed ron if he had known the story of the argument beforehand.

    if i was harry i wouldn't forgive ron for what he said, though the words were said in anger, ron must believe in what he said, otherwise he wouldn't of said what he did

    Author's Response:

    Severus wouldn't have refused to help a student, since he is responsible for Ron while he is at Malachite cottage.

    Ron does believe partially in what he said, but remember, he's also an immature twelve-year-old kid and he has a lot of growing up to do.  Harry has some things to say to him which will make him think and realize that he was wrong as will the punishment Severus gives him. 

Title: A Very Pointed Object Lesson 01 Oct 2008 6:06 am
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    o wow this was AMAZING! OMG! i love the way you portrayed Sev and how you don't totally loose his character

    Author's Response: Thank you, I hope you like the next part!
Title: A Very Pointed Object Lesson 01 Oct 2008 12:14 am
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG, that was some walk through the woods. I could almost feel sorry for Ron here, except I know he kind of deserved it for being so monstrous to Harry before. The glen has a sense of justice, it seems.

    Can't wait to see what else happens!

    Author's Response: It does and Ron does deserve it, though I feel bad for him too!
Title: A Very Pointed Object Lesson 30 Sep 2008 10:29 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my Goodness!

    Poor Ron, That had to hurt! I guess that he's feeling sorry now, isn't he?

    Hmm, a surprise visitor, trouble? Oh no, why do I have a feeling that it could be Draco! Or worse, Malfoy Senior!

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes, it hurt a lot! And he feels very bad now, LOL!

    The surprise visitor . . .well those were good guesses! But you'll see next chapter.

Title: A Very Pointed Object Lesson 30 Sep 2008 10:16 pm
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! I love how you had Sev handle Ron, it was great. And Ron is right to worry that Harry might not forgive him, Harry has a right to be angry at him.

    Can't wait to see what happens next.

    Author's Response: Yes he does, and Harry is quite angry at him indeed.
Title: A Very Pointed Object Lesson 30 Sep 2008 10:13 pm
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ow! I think Ron's learned his lesson, but will Harry think so? I couldn't blame him if he didn't want to talk to Ron for a long time. Please update soon.

    Author's Response: No, and neither could I! Ron did behave like a classic jerk!
Title: A Very Pointed Object Lesson 30 Sep 2008 9:33 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Bravo Hermione! Good for you!I think Ron's learned his lesson, all right! great chapter!

    Author's Response: yeah, she's something else! I'd say Ron has definitely learned something. 

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