Great story, I can hardly wait to see the chapter concerning the race. ^^
Author's Response: That should be coming up soon, in about another three chapters, I think.
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| 05 Oct 2008 3:43 am
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| Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous)
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Wow great chapter! I love this story!
Author's Response: Thanks!
i'm too sleepy to do so right now...so i'll just leave a review.
very nice job on this and i can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks again, and the next chapter's up finally!
| Title: The Challenge
| 04 Oct 2008 5:11 am
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| Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous)
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That fight was incredible! Go Severus! I feel like I ought to be waving a flag or something with team Snape on it. Brilliant! This might be a long fic but oh it is so worth reading!
Author's Response: Thnak you very much! I could make you one if you'd like, LOL!
| Title: The Challenge
| 04 Oct 2008 5:03 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Yes, Sev stomped them into the dirt! Loved it! But now Harry has to stick to them as well and win that race. I know he can do it! Boreal's the best.
Author's Response: Boreal is indeed the best pegasus and he'll prove it come race day.
| Title: The Challenge
| 04 Oct 2008 5:02 am
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| Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous)
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Wow! This is awesome! Can't wait for more! Hope Harry & Boreal kick all the other riders arses.
Author's Response: You'll see, won't you?
Yeah! Sev whipped them good!I loved it! Now all Harry has to do is win the race and they're home free! You can do it, Harry!
Author's Response: Yes, he can, so long as he gets to practice!
| Title: The Challenge
| 04 Oct 2008 4:39 am
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| Reviewer: GoLd (Signed)
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Love it! Am I it? I say a phoenix as a pet!!! Anyway I love your story and hope he wins the tournament.
Author's Response: Umm . . .I'll let you know next chapter. The phoenix sounds cool though. You'll have to wait a bit to see what happens in the Skybolt.
I didn't review this earlier because I thought it was still the previous chapter. I just never thought that you would have updated so quickly. I was pleasantly surprised.
Great action! I agree that you seem to have a nack for this, and yes--you would be great at writing an action script for a movie! I'd go see it!
Author's Response: Yeah, i was pleasantly surprised myself at how quickly I updated. I've never tried scripts yet, but if I ever do and get one published, I'll let you know.
he'd better win the race or i will murder you... well, no, i won't, but i'll be most displeased. jeesh. what's with all the evil cliffies?
Author's Response: That's good to know, else I won't be able to write any more and I'd haunt you forever, LOL! I like suspense in my fics, lots of it.
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