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Title: Night Flyer 14 Oct 2008 3:55 pm
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi there,

    I think you misunderstood the nature of my review. I have absolutely no problem with you mentioning God in your story. My complaints have to do to with your characters and character portrayal, not your desire for your story to contain religion. Nor was I reviewing merely to rub in your face that I wasn't in love your fic—I thought it would be gracious and appropriate to explain why I was not reviewing a story that I still generally take the time to read, and I also simply wished to compliment you on your impressive dedication. This was not intended to be a slam—it was a somewhat backhanded compliment, perhaps, but compliment all the same!

    Nice chapter.

    Author's Response: Okay and thank you for it.
Title: Night Flyer 14 Oct 2008 1:34 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    They better win! Great description of the race track and how it is modified for flyers instead of runners.

    Author's Response: Thanks, it was tough trying to think of all that.
Title: Night Flyer 14 Oct 2008 12:58 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry and Boreal are going to win... aren't they?? They have to! they cant go to that awful O'shea!

    Author's Response: If I told you the answer . . .it would spoil the next chapter. 
Title: Night Flyer 14 Oct 2008 11:09 am
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    oooo that was great! i can't wait for the next part with the race lol i can just imagine Sev freaking out

    Author's Response: Yeah, poor Sev's gonna have a nervous breakdown because the ones who fly in the Skybolt ain't nice people.
Title: Night Flyer 14 Oct 2008 9:22 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    It is so wonderously written - unlike horse races where the rider rules the horse, here it is the exact opposite. It nearly brings the question why they are not racing ridersless /is that really a word?/ Mila

    Author's Response:

    Technically, pegasus and rider are supposed to work as a team, but since Harry has almost no experience, he relies on Boreal to know what to do, it's kind of like pairing a green rider with an experienced jumper in a steeplechase.  However, the Skybolt is a race unto itself and even Boreal's experience won't be enough, he'll need Harry for encouragement and to fend off the other riders trying to run him off the course or box him in so he can't fly quickly.


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