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Reviews For Arms of a Dark Angel
I think you misunderstood the nature of my review. I have absolutely no problem with you mentioning God in your story. My complaints have to do to with your characters and character portrayal, not your desire for your story to contain religion. Nor was I reviewing merely to rub in your face that I wasn't in love your fic—I thought it would be gracious and appropriate to explain why I was not reviewing a story that I still generally take the time to read, and I also simply wished to compliment you on your impressive dedication. This was not intended to be a slam—it was a somewhat backhanded compliment, perhaps, but compliment all the same! Nice chapter. Author's Response: Okay and thank you for it.
Author's Response: Thanks, it was tough trying to think of all that.
Author's Response: If I told you the answer . . .it would spoil the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yeah, poor Sev's gonna have a nervous breakdown because the ones who fly in the Skybolt ain't nice people.
Author's Response: Technically, pegasus and rider are supposed to work as a team, but since Harry has almost no experience, he relies on Boreal to know what to do, it's kind of like pairing a green rider with an experienced jumper in a steeplechase. However, the Skybolt is a race unto itself and even Boreal's experience won't be enough, he'll need Harry for encouragement and to fend off the other riders trying to run him off the course or box him in so he can't fly quickly. |
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