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Reviews For Selene Lily Potter: Year One
One minor point, I noticed a few spelling errors. You used "latter" instead of "later" and "grieve" instead of "grief". Just thought you might want to know. ;) I'm a former English teacher, so I'm correcting things as I read, force of habit. Update soon! Author's Response: Thank you! I didn't even notice the errors, thank you for bringing them to my attention. Spelling and grammer aren't my best traits, which is sad seeing as I love to write. If you don't mind, in future chapters if you notice any errors could you just tell me please. I can then fix it. Thank you again for reviewing and bringing those errors to my attention. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story! :)
I am looking forward to the Snape and Selene conversation. Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, you are right there is no Harry only Selene. |
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