Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 3 14 May 2023 3:09 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m so glad that Snape wants to get to know her!
Title: Chapter 3 09 Aug 2008 5:27 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    That was great. I like how Severus dealt with them and I hope he doesn't terrify Sel too much with her detention.

    One minor point, I noticed a few spelling errors. You used "latter" instead of "later" and "grieve" instead of "grief". Just thought you might want to know. ;) I'm a former English teacher, so I'm correcting things as I read, force of habit.

    Update soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I didn't even notice the errors, thank you for bringing them to my attention. Spelling and grammer aren't my best traits, which is sad seeing as I love to write. If you don't mind, in future chapters if you notice any errors could you just tell me please. I can then fix it. Thank you again for reviewing and bringing those errors to my attention. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story! :)
Title: Chapter 3 09 Aug 2008 1:47 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I just started this and I guess I missed something. I am taking it that there was no Harry - there was Selene.

    I am looking forward to the Snape and Selene conversation.

    Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, you are right there is no Harry only Selene.

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