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Title: Friends, Enemies, and Trust 06 Sep 2008 3:09 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter, great length! It's noce to see Snape being so nice.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Friends, Enemies, and Trust 11 Aug 2008 1:54 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Great job here! I really like the way Sev and Selene's realtionship is starting to develop.

    The hot chocolate was soo cute!

    Here are some spelling/punctuation errors I noticed. These should read:

    "Or else what, Weasel?"

    Ron stayed silent.

    Smirking, Zacharias said. "That's what I thought

    Zacharias Steel, third year Gryffindor, was a known bully and even students in higher years avoided him. There was no doubt in anyone's mind

    He's going to make your life hell now, you know?"

    Sel nodded and stood. "I'll see you guys later."

    Hermione Granger stood and handed Sel a piece of parchment. "This is the password, in case you forget."


    the school's healer."

    that her family had always yelled

    'Why am I lying to him?'

    'painful' instead of 'painfull'

    "since" instead of "sence"

    "two cups" not "too"

    "as well as coffee"

    Until

    "Ron was wrong. You're not mean."

    Don't be surprised if it is sooner . . .

    I think I caught them all. :)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! Thank you very much for telling me the errors I missed. At the moment I'm working on the next chapter but as soon as I'm done I'll fix it. Though it may have to be tommorow, cause at the moment I'm at my grams. Again, thank you for the review and for telling me the errors.

    Nightshade:)


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