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Title: Bonds Strengthened 06 Sep 2008 3:12 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I wasn't sure but I checked and my sperll check says abit is not a word, you used it at least twice it should be a bit, two words not one, if I'm not mistaken, :D
    Great chappie!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Sorry about the mistakes.
Title: Bonds Strengthened 13 Aug 2008 3:21 pm
Reviewer: Syret (Signed) [Report This]
    GREAT job!!!!!!!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Bonds Strengthened 13 Aug 2008 4:49 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I think the pace of this story is going along just fine. This was a very cute chapter, very much looking forward to the next chapter and hopefully just some Sel and Sev time. Keep up the great work and please update again soon. LES

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I plan to update tomorrow, but I might not be able to. I hope I can.

    Thanks again, Nightshade :)

Title: Bonds Strengthened 13 Aug 2008 4:26 am
Reviewer: SilvaGirl (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Not moving too fast. It's going well.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I was worried I was.
Title: Bonds Strengthened 13 Aug 2008 3:50 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    That was great. I liked the way the twins teased Ron but agreed not to prank Sel or her friends. And the bonding moment between the four friends was excellent.

    So was the last part with Sev and Sel alone. I think it was good that he told her he wasn't mad at her and that he was afraid she would get hurt. The hug was wonderful. Little girls need a lot of hugs. And of course Severus would love Lily's daughter.

    Some minor corrections:

    "label" should be used instead of "lable"

    "pity" only has one t in it.

    "Sel would beat you to it" is how that should read. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you! I was worried I had put the hug scene in too soon. And again, a BIG thank you for the corrections!

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