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Reviews For Selene Lily Potter: Year One
Great chappie! Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Sorry about the mistakes.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you! I plan to update tomorrow, but I might not be able to. I hope I can. Thanks again, Nightshade :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I was worried I was.
So was the last part with Sev and Sel alone. I think it was good that he told her he wasn't mad at her and that he was afraid she would get hurt. The hug was wonderful. Little girls need a lot of hugs. And of course Severus would love Lily's daughter. Some minor corrections: "label" should be used instead of "lable" "pity" only has one t in it. "Sel would beat you to it" is how that should read. :) Author's Response: Thank you! I was worried I had put the hug scene in too soon. And again, a BIG thank you for the corrections! |
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