| Title: Halloween and Trolls
| 13 Sep 2008 7:12 pm
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| Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous)
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I am glad that someone is taking notice of that little girl.
Author's Response: Thank you!
That was great! I liked how sel froze the troll. But oh boy, now she's in trouble with Severus for sure.
Author's Response: Thank you!
The story is still great, but there are mistakes here and there, I would suggest a beta. You can look for a website called Perfect Imagination, it's a site for HP bets readers. If you're interested or if you want to make your fanfiction better, you can go look for one on that site. I'm all caught up now! Yay, :D
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! You are right, I should probably get a beta. But I'm going to be honest, I'm not exactly sure how that whole thing works. I'll try and figure it out so you readers can enjoy the story more. Thank you for the advice though. As for updating soon, I'll try my best. But again, schools started.
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