Lol, are you sure that will be enough time Severus? Not if you have to chase that kid through your quarters, it won't be! Omg, I was worried Harry would start ripping pages out of the heirloom book (and was very curious about what Severus would to for punishment or to let him know his behavior was unacceptable), but was pleasantly surprised when he didn't. I suppose Harry's probably very bright and curious about the world, despite his obvious problems. Good chapter!
-P.G.
This looks very interesting, there are a few minor grammor errors, but all in all it's very good! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Please continue this story. Its good so far. The only other story like this was abandoned. It will be ashamed if this one is abandoned as well.
O.O
Where's the rest??
Author's Response: lol... i have my good times and my bad times. i'm home sick today so hopefully i'll be able to get something up, but who knows? I write more frequently in the summer time, which is of course unfortunate for my readers. it's hard to follow a story that isn't updated regularly, i realize, and i apologize...
| Title: Chapter 5
| 03 Nov 2008 9:41 am
|
| Reviewer: tortilla lady (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
I read on FF.net that you were not planning to continue this story. I hope that this is not the case. I have read the story that person claimed you plagiarized and although it is true they have similar concepts they are not the same. You did not plagiarize. If it was true that you did plagiarize then that would mean all the Vampire!Snape fanfiction and Severitus/Sevitus fanfiction would be considered plagiarism as well. It is not plagiarism to have similar concepts or plots for stories. With the abundance of Harry Potter fanfiction out there, this would be an impossible feat. Please do not get discouraged and continue this story. If you wish to correspond with me my e-mail is mirei (underscore) ikari (at) hotmail (dot) com.
Author's Response: i really appreciate all the feedback from my fans. i have in fact started to write the next chapter on several occasions, and frozen somewhere in the middle. i feel like if i can just get past the next chapter, the rest will be easier. like i said, my fans have been really, really supportive and i am trying.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 22 Sep 2008 1:31 am
|
| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
I like the story so far, keep up the good work.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 21 Sep 2008 1:17 am
|
| Reviewer: Elle (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
this is an awesome story! i love how you wrote Sev in the father role
| Title: Chapter 5
| 17 Sep 2008 5:36 am
|
| Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
I just want to let you know this is an amazing story. Keep up the good work.
Or will it.... Hehe brilliant chapters keep up the great work. Don't worry about the lapse in between updates RL is a bitch but we understand.
Aww, that was sweet. I hope bathtime goes okay, but somehow I think Sev's going to have a hard time and probably a flood all over by the time he's done.
|