oh i love dusty already, he is so funny, i hope severus can deal with harry and give him a nice and stable home life, he does seem to be doing a great job
Author's Response: i'm glad that you like dusty, i wanted to have an original character, and the house elf seemed like a good way to go. i figured it would add some necessary humor to the story, which otherwise might be hard to get through because it's depressing.
| Title: Chapter 7
| 27 Jan 2009 3:08 pm
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| Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous)
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Hello! I've just discovered your story and I really like it! Harry is cute (even if he has so many problems). I'm waiting for the next chapter so that we see how the move to Snape's house goes :)
Author's Response: i'm glad that you are stumbling upon this story on the second go round. i seem to have a lot of encouragement thus far. glad you like my version of harry.
Loved it, especially how Severus figured out a way to show his disapproval of Harry's actions without being nasty. I love Dusty, he's hilarious and such a change from the usual! House elf TV addict, awesome! Could you imagine what he'd be like if he watched, say Fresh Prince of Bel Air? Keep up the wonderful work.
Aw Dusty sounds adorable! And crazy!
You have managed to write this subject quite tastefully. I wasn't sure before I began to read it, if I would find it too difficult to read, but you have done a nice job.
Please don't let the Dursleys get away with this!
Great characters...
I love Dusty! It's so rarely that people write an original House Elf, and his different way of speaking is brilliant! Harry was cute and the fight with the socks was done very well. The ending to the chapter was fine, but now I'm curious as to what's going to happen next...
Dusty is cute, I loved Harry with the socks, poor Severus! : )
lmao that was great love how the house elf is
Sure is a different kind of House Elf. XD Anyways...The moment with the sock was adorable. Cute as a button although I anticipate that traveling anywhere will result in a tantrum of epic proportions so soon. At least Harry probably wouldn't have a fit at the toystore so Severus can knock off spoiled brat on his list of troubles. Excellent job. Keep up the good work and update buddy. I can picture Harry raiding Severus's wardrobe in attempt to gain some freedom and have mismatched robes and all...XD That would be a funny idea. Anyways, update soon. Your pal, BasiliskPrince.
A house elf that calls Severus dude? I don't see how he could be alive. He must have been raised by a family of hippie house elves.
Taking Harry shopping would prove interesting. I think it would be best if Severus work Harry up to it by getting Harry used to more and more people before taking him on a shopping trip and even then Severus should do it at a time when there aren't crowds of people around.
Anyways, keep up the good work!
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