You would beta for me? That'd be great. I have a beta for my other story but I feel bad signing any one beta up for two stories at once because my characters are very different in my stories and in general it's different... Plus I like to have different kinds of feedback, if you know what I mean. Different betas kind of have different beta-ing personalities. I think that helps me grow as a writer. I was thinking about doing this one w/out a beta just so I could get it in quick, but I have gotten a couple of hints about typos and the sort, and I like to have some feedback on the material before I submit it. Plus it's nice to have an actual conversation about where I'm going with it. If you're still interested shoot me an email at writersblock @ rocketmail . com (nix the spaces, of course).

As for the rest of your review, I'm glad you liked the plot line, and yeah, I think Harry's a cutie, too. I liked the idea of him reacting to the word because it showed that he had at least a basic understanding of words having a meaning to them, which means that he's more developed than a lot of case studies in his situation (yes, I actually studied this first... I'm obviously  not going to follow the case studies to a T, but as my english teacher said "If you know the rules, then you have an intent when you break them") lol. plus I thought it was kind of cute. Thanks for the review!