Hmm...I do hope we get some answers to these questions soon. I'm glad I kept reading your fic because it's gotten better, though I really want to know more about what happened at the Dursley house and if both parents were responsible for Harry's imprisonment, or just one. Did Dudley know about Harry? I'm very curious about the books and the baby--please update soon!
-P.G.
Author's Response: I'll look at all your reviews in one go here... I found it enlightening to read your progression through the story and I liked how much information you gave about your reaction to different parts. It was incredibly helpful to me to see what was making you raise your eyebrows and what you thought was good. I like it when a reviewer says more than just "good work" or whatever. I liked the fact that your reviews gave me something to improve upon while still making me feel good about my writing.
Hopefully you'll have your answers soon, although I've learned not to give out due dates for myself because I invariably fall behind, so I'm not going to tell you that I should have the next chapter out some time this week :P To be fair, I do have to think a little bit about this cliff hanger so that my answer does not disappoint. I thought that your vision of Pet reading to Harry was cute.