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Reviews For Lost Boy
Taking Harry shopping would prove interesting. I think it would be best if Severus work Harry up to it by getting Harry used to more and more people before taking him on a shopping trip and even then Severus should do it at a time when there aren't crowds of people around. Anyways, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Haha, thank you! I'll try and update ASAP- which is still slow in regard to my readers, unfortunately. Between work and school I hardly have any time for writing, and I have to have enough time to write the entirity of the chapter at once or I end up getting stuck.
Author's Response: thank you... it felt really good to be writing agian, tbh... expect that my writing will be a little slow- work's a killer- but i am continuing this.
Hope you update soon, this one is one of my favs and I want to see what happens next. Author's Response: Wow, high praise from you... Now i'm scared to screw it u, haha... thank you for the review!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like how Severus dealt. I don't want him to be too lenient because 1) that doesn't seem Severus-ish and 2) it wouldn't help Harry, in the long run... At the same time, Harry is damaged and does needed to be treated w/ caution.
Author's Response: Hee hee... Yup, it's all Sev's fault... Oh, well. Yeah, I wanted to move it along so it seems like Harry has some chance, at least. I have Harry's ability to comprehend things a bit higher than is practical just to move the story along, but I haven't gotten any complaints so far... I might find a way to explain that later on anyway, who knows?
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