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Title: Chapter 7 26 Jan 2009 12:54 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Dusty is cute, I loved Harry with the socks, poor Severus! : )
Title: Chapter 6 26 Jan 2009 9:07 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good story. Keep going with it, please.
Title: Chapter 7 26 Jan 2009 6:36 am
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    lmao that was great love how the house elf is
Title: Chapter 7 26 Jan 2009 5:32 am
Reviewer: BasiliskPrince (Signed) [Report This]
    Sure is a different kind of House Elf. XD Anyways...The moment with the sock was adorable. Cute as a button although I anticipate that traveling anywhere will result in a tantrum of epic proportions so soon. At least Harry probably wouldn't have a fit at the toystore so Severus can knock off spoiled brat on his list of troubles. Excellent job. Keep up the good work and update buddy. I can picture Harry raiding Severus's wardrobe in attempt to gain some freedom and have mismatched robes and all...XD That would be a funny idea. Anyways, update soon. Your pal, BasiliskPrince.
Title: Chapter 7 26 Jan 2009 5:21 am
Reviewer: omega13a (Signed) [Report This]
    A house elf that calls Severus dude? I don't see how he could be alive. He must have been raised by a family of hippie house elves.
    Taking Harry shopping would prove interesting. I think it would be best if Severus work Harry up to it by getting Harry used to more and more people before taking him on a shopping trip and even then Severus should do it at a time when there aren't crowds of people around.
    Anyways, keep up the good work!
Title: Chapter 6 25 Jan 2009 8:55 am
Reviewer: BasiliskPrince (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story so very much. I think the thing I like most about this story is the adorable little reactions that your Harry has. Lifting up his ball, splashing Snape...Snape warming up enough to splash back. You made Dudley more remorseful than most usually make him...but I think if he never knew about Harry..he would be. He wouldn't know his parents ways in regard to his cousin. In short I love this story and I love this chapter. Update soon please.

    Author's Response: Haha, thank you! I'll try and update ASAP- which is still slow in regard to my readers, unfortunately.  Between work and school I hardly have any time for writing, and I have to have enough time to write the entirity of the chapter at once or I end up getting stuck.
Title: Chapter 6 25 Jan 2009 5:37 am
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm very glad you FINALLY updated. I do so hope you continue. I enjoyed this chapter very much. Well done.

    Author's Response: thank you...  it felt really good to be writing agian, tbh...  expect that my writing will be a little slow- work's a killer- but i am continuing this.
Title: Chapter 6 25 Jan 2009 12:21 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter1 Loved the way severus handled Harry, he behaved like an intelligent adult here instead of a venegful idiot, much like you'd expect a professor with an emotionally damaged child to behave, because though Severus might have issues with harry's father, I think he could put them aside in this situation, he is not stupid nor obsessed. Sometimes people forget that as a spy he would HAVE to put aside his personal feelings in order to do his job well, and if he could do it with evil creatures like Voldy & the DE, he could do it with Harry, who is a helpless child.

    Hope you update soon, this one is one of my favs and I want to see what happens next.

    Author's Response: Wow, high praise from you...  Now i'm scared to screw it u, haha... thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 6 24 Jan 2009 3:52 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    Yep - definitely worth it! Little Harry is so cute! I like how Severus dealt with Harry when he ran away, and the water fight was fun to read. Thanks!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like how Severus dealt.  I don't want him to be too lenient because 1) that doesn't seem Severus-ish and 2) it wouldn't help Harry, in the long run... At the same time, Harry is damaged and does needed to be treated w/ caution.
Title: Chapter 6 24 Jan 2009 2:37 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol that'll teach him for getting in the bath in transfigured clothes : ) its cute that he seems to be getting at least some progress with Harry : )

    Author's Response:

    Hee hee...  Yup, it's all Sev's fault...  Oh, well.  Yeah, I wanted to move it along so it seems like Harry has some chance, at least.  I have Harry's ability to comprehend things a bit higher than is practical just to move the story along, but I haven't gotten any complaints so far...  I might find a way to explain that later on anyway, who knows?

     


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