awww that was really cute! and i'm so glad you decided to continue with this, its a wonderful story
Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate that
Poor Severus. Having the temp transfigurations were off. Severus will definitely need to find some way to communicate with Harry. The sooner the better. Anyways, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Haha.. Well, a lesson learned and all that. Harry enjoyed being in with his clothes. It is hard for him not being able to have a proper conversation with the boy, but Harry listens, if you notice... The hard thing is that Severus isn't sure how much Harry understands and how much is going over his head.
| Title: Chapter 6
| 24 Jan 2009 6:38 am
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| Reviewer: DazzlingD (Anonymous)
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So glad to see you back. wonderful chapter, please keep up the good work. Sev is trying so hard.
Author's Response: yeah.. i really like writing sev in stories like this where he is kind of forced to be nice right away... i know it's a little OOC but it seems to fit in this situation, anyway... i have tried to show that he is still the man who gets frustrated easy and everything, but he is trying really hard.
This looks very interesting, there are a few minor grammor errors, but all in all it's very good! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Please continue this story. Its good so far. The only other story like this was abandoned. It will be ashamed if this one is abandoned as well.
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Where's the rest??
Author's Response: lol... i have my good times and my bad times. i'm home sick today so hopefully i'll be able to get something up, but who knows? I write more frequently in the summer time, which is of course unfortunate for my readers. it's hard to follow a story that isn't updated regularly, i realize, and i apologize...
| Title: Chapter 5
| 03 Nov 2008 9:41 am
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| Reviewer: tortilla lady (Anonymous)
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I read on FF.net that you were not planning to continue this story. I hope that this is not the case. I have read the story that person claimed you plagiarized and although it is true they have similar concepts they are not the same. You did not plagiarize. If it was true that you did plagiarize then that would mean all the Vampire!Snape fanfiction and Severitus/Sevitus fanfiction would be considered plagiarism as well. It is not plagiarism to have similar concepts or plots for stories. With the abundance of Harry Potter fanfiction out there, this would be an impossible feat. Please do not get discouraged and continue this story. If you wish to correspond with me my e-mail is mirei (underscore) ikari (at) hotmail (dot) com.
Author's Response: i really appreciate all the feedback from my fans. i have in fact started to write the next chapter on several occasions, and frozen somewhere in the middle. i feel like if i can just get past the next chapter, the rest will be easier. like i said, my fans have been really, really supportive and i am trying.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 22 Sep 2008 1:31 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I like the story so far, keep up the good work.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 21 Sep 2008 1:17 am
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| Reviewer: Elle (Anonymous)
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this is an awesome story! i love how you wrote Sev in the father role
| Title: Chapter 5
| 17 Sep 2008 5:36 am
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| Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous)
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I just want to let you know this is an amazing story. Keep up the good work.
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