| Title: The Past
| 25 Oct 2008 8:32 am
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| Reviewer: ehren (Anonymous)
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You have my attention. Did Dumbledore glamour his hair or transfigure it? But if it keeps growing I imagine it'd go back to normal.... -thinks- Anyway, write more!
Wow, it's been a while since I've read one of these, rar as they are to begin with. You have a good start here, I'm rather curious to see how Severus and Harry take to each other. More Please! ASAP! ASAP ASAP ASAP!!!
A very, very good start, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
| Title: The Past
| 15 Sep 2008 4:05 am
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| Reviewer: ... (Anonymous)
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I really liked this story, you should definatly finesh it!
| Title: The Past
| 04 Sep 2008 7:51 am
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| Reviewer: loki (Anonymous)
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i like!
why is tobias so...i dunno, careing??
"Breath" rhymes with death. I don't think that was the word you wanted. It looks like you wanted Dumbledore to tell Harry to BREATHE. That 'e' on the end makes all the difference--literally.
YAY! I looooove this so far!! The plot line is amazing and I can not wait to see what this will evolve into!!
| Title: The Past
| 21 Aug 2008 6:09 am
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| Reviewer: ORKCHILD (Anonymous)
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Time travel, de-aged Harry And Snape as a brother. Wow, three of my favorite types of stories all in one. Great, I cannot wait to read more.
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