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Reviews For Severus's Reluctant Brother
cant wait until the next update which i hope will be soon.. good work... Dracosgoddess123
This story has the promise of a great storyline. By the way in the paragraph that Dumbledore tells Harry to hush, I think you meant expend magic not expand. only mistake I saw. Otherwise very enjoyable first chapter.
I can't wait to see what happens when the "brothers" meet each other. ;-}
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