Potions and Snitches
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Title: The Past 16 Aug 2008 1:28 pm
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    great first chapter. hope the others are of the same standard or even better. i take it this story will have Tobias Snape as a good guy and not as the abusive father???

    cant wait until the next update which i hope will be soon..

    good work...
    Dracosgoddess123
Title: The Past 16 Aug 2008 9:15 am
Reviewer: lotrluver (Signed) [Report This]
    I look forward to reading more. How will you explain Harry in the past and mesh it with the present and the situation with voldemort. Snape knows Harry in the past and wizards are taught never to mess with time, yet Dumbledore seems to know Harry and is willing to change him. Hmm, I look forward to the repurcusions this could cause to the modern wizarding world.
    This story has the promise of a great storyline.
    By the way in the paragraph that Dumbledore tells Harry to hush, I think you meant expend magic not expand. only mistake I saw. Otherwise very enjoyable first chapter.
Title: The Past 16 Aug 2008 8:37 am
Reviewer: Leilia Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant!
    I can't wait to see what happens when the "brothers" meet each other. ;-}
Title: The Past 16 Aug 2008 8:25 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    It's good but I don't really understand why Dumbledore didn't explain things to Harry. And i also don't understand how he knew who Harry was. I think that should be explained.

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