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Reviews For You'd be the first
Title: You'd be first 08 Dec 2020 8:04 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting and insightful, thank you
Title: You'd be first 14 May 2011 4:13 pm
Reviewer: Zireael07 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the discussion between Harry and Snape and what each of them says. So beautiful. The fic really makes you think.
Title: You'd be first 25 Aug 2008 8:41 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: You'd be first 24 Aug 2008 1:43 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    That was great and I feel sorry for both harry and Severus here, both have suffered a loss, but how sad that Severus thinks he is in hell now that Lily is dead. It is as if he has no hope. Harry at least has his friends to help him get through this.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you.  :)

     

    Yes, I always felt sorry for Snape for being so extremely lonely. 

Title: You'd be first 24 Aug 2008 7:34 am
Reviewer: EBWelsh (Signed) [Report This]
    aw, i read this while listening to Open Arms by Journey... *wipes tear away.
    Very good one-shot, I liked this a lot even though I'm an Atheist.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much! :)

Title: You'd be first 24 Aug 2008 1:59 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, who knew Snape could be romantic? "ever since you mother's be gone I've been in Hell" obviously not the exact words, you get the just. Good one shot!

    Author's Response:

    Well, he's gotta be a romantic somewhere in his heart, otherwise he wouldn't have gone to Dumbledore after Lily was killed and begged for a chance to redeem himself.

     
    It's a slightly cliché line, I know, but i really thought it was kinda true.


    Thanks for reviewing! :)


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