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Reviews For Father of Mine
Title: Chapter 1 10 Sep 2008 11:28 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice first chapter of a first fic. The writing is smooth and even though this is a common plot device (which we all love) it wasn't boring and I didn't want to skim.

    Author's Response: Thanks very much.  It's good to know that it reads well.  :-)
Title: Chapter 1 07 Sep 2008 2:50 am
Reviewer: AmandaBurke76 (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter please update soon.

    Author's Response: Glad you like it.  Thanks for reviewing. :)
Title: Chapter 1 06 Sep 2008 3:29 am
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    pretty good first chapter. cant say much else as i will need to read a few more chapters before i can really get into it but it looks promising

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  Second chapter up.  Will post Chapter three sometime next weekend.

Title: Chapter 1 04 Sep 2008 7:32 am
Reviewer: Rhea (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, I donk like Severus in this chapter very much. If not at all. Not because you described him badly - no!, but because of his attitude towards Harry. He knew all along that Harry was his son - and he doesn't care a bit about him! This just can't be! He doesn't want any kind of relationship with Harry, not because the boy's safety can suffer, but because it's just that: he doesn't want it. I'm sad because of it.....
    And, how did it happen, that Snape became a father of the Boy-Who-Lived?

    Author's Response: lol, he is a bit if a jerk right now, isn't he?  Chapter three will elaborate a bit more on the background...  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 1 03 Sep 2008 7:11 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi, I've already reviewed, but I am responding to your response concerning your response about CP in your story. I, as well, hope you don't take that route. You did mention that Snape might strike out in anger. I really hope by that you just mean maybe a slap in the face or something (not that that is acceptable behaviour by any means), but nothing more agressive.

    I COULD see canon Snape slapping Harry for what he sees as disrepect or insolence. Please don't go beyond that.

    Can't wait for the next update!
Title: Chapter 1 03 Sep 2008 4:39 pm
Reviewer: dragonero (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start!!! I hope you will continue soon!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 1 02 Sep 2008 7:16 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Unusual start; usually it's Harry at the start plus the means he discovers the truth. Snape's utter reluctance is IC, but why he is nasty to Harry if he knows James is not his father? Just curious.

    Author's Response:

    I was trying to find an unusual angle for this Sevitus, so maybe I've succeeded!  lol, we'll see... 

    It is hard to understand why Snape would be so bitter.  Actually, another reviewed had the same question (my response to that questio is below), but basically, Snape considers Harry to be James' son and biology be damned.  It will hopefully be more understandable as more of the history unfolds.

    Thanks for the review.

Title: Chapter 1 02 Sep 2008 4:37 am
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent beginning.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  Glad to hear you like it. 

Title: Chapter 1 01 Sep 2008 11:06 pm
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    really good story so far. I like the ideas and thought behind it all. Keep it up

    Author's Response: Thanks very much.  The idea has been in my head for some time.  And while it's a bit daunting to put those ideas out there for others to read, it's also fun.  I hope you continue to enjoy it. :-)
Title: Chapter 1 01 Sep 2008 10:37 pm
Reviewer: melrose666 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great start to the story--it will be interesting to see the direction this will go. Looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks very much.  Will hopefully have another update around the weekend or so!


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