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Reviews For Father of Mine
I hate when Snape is to soft and mushy; although I hope he gets a LITTLE nicer to Harry without becoming Mother Theresa. I just love that reference to Star Wars, and Harry`s reaction. Just perfect, and really realistic. I could just imagine Harry in canon having the same reaction. Please update soon, this story is very promising. Can`t wait to see how Harry handles the fact that he really IS Snape`s son, and the circumstances behind it. Author's Response: lol. Nope, not kidding at all - Snape is not being very nice right now. Some people can write a warm-fuzzy Snape, but I would have a hard time making that work. So, he'll stay a bit (or, maybe more than a bit...) snarky though this story. But maybe he'll lighten up a little... ;) Hope you continue to enjoy it.
I say "actually" because I rarely am this optimistic at the start of a fan fiction. Something is usually distracting about them—poor quality writing, OOC characters, unrealistically portrayed plots/reactions/situations, too slow moving, too fast moving...etc. This, however, is exceedingly well written and very promising. Harry's reaction was perfect. :D PERFECT. I mean, what do you even SAY when someone tells you something so (in your mind) ludicrous? It's an incomprehensibly bizarre situation. I hate it when they both just go "We're father and son? You mean that? Wow, this is really strange, but okay." I mean, really. I lost it on this line..."No, Luke...I am your father". Bwahaha. So I take it Harry is no being deliberately self-destructive with the broom stunts? At least, not yet. (If you don't want to answer this, plot-wise, that's fine.) Poor Harry. You just want to give him a hug. Not that that would solve that much, but still. Anyway, I'm giving you five stars. Can't wait to see how this goes! Author's Response: Glad to hear that you like it, and thanks very much for the five stars! I just couldn't see him getting worked up enough to actually believe Snape... not without any evidence, that is. And no, Harry wasn't being deliberately self-destructive. I think, though, that the stunts suggest he is not always aware of how others (particularly adults) view his actions, and also that he does not place a high priority on his own personal safety. Poor kid is right. Anyway, next update should be around the weekend or so.
Author's Response: awww... my very first "whoot"! Thank you!!! |
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