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Reviews For Father of Mine
Title: Chapter 3 30 Nov 2017 1:33 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, Snape, if you want one word from me to describe you, it would be cruel. Really? Can't you see that Harry is in denial? Also, the way you are acting, even if Merlin himself told Harry that you were his father, I don't think he would have wanted it to be true then!

    Amazing story! Hope it isn't abandoned like the many others I have read.
Title: Chapter 3 28 Sep 2011 4:55 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    It's all good, but in the last couple of paragraphs all the sudden you had a bunch of spelling or grammar mistakes like you were hurrying and it made it hard to read.
Title: Chapter 3 23 Apr 2009 5:44 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    'Don't let your mind wander...It's too small to be out on its own' ROFL

    Author's Response: hahaha... sounds kind of like a Snape-ish thing to say, doesn't it?  Thanks for reviewing. :)
Title: Chapter 3 23 Apr 2009 10:38 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh, very secretive. I'm very curious about the first memory, which seems to portray Severus as a husband and a father to another child. Are they still living? Why did Severus show him that particular memoir?

    I kind of feel Harry's pain after what he saw. I can't believe they'd test something so uncertain on him, as an unborn baby, no less.

    Anyway, the poor boy is about to have a reality check when he finds out his worst nightmare is coming to life! This is very well-written and detailed; I'm enjoying every word!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    lol... can't reveal too much now, can I??  Answers are on the way, I promise...   And yes, Harry's not pleased to see how casual others have been about manipulating his life.  He's in a bit of a hard spot, though, because those people - Dumbledore, his parents (meaning, loosely, Lily and James), and to a small degree, maybe even Snape - are the same people that he has previously loved, trusted and/or relied upon to some extent.  Talk about being conflicted.  Thanks for the review!

Title: Chapter 3 10 Oct 2008 2:07 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Cruel, cruel Snape.

    Author's Response: Yes.
Title: Chapter 3 20 Sep 2008 11:43 am
Reviewer: janey (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great story, love it so far

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Glad you like it. 
Title: Chapter 3 19 Sep 2008 11:58 pm
Reviewer: Saigo (Anonymous) [Report This]
    *grabs Harry and hides him* I am absolutely seething furious at Snape. If I could, I'd slice him open right now and strangle him with his entrails. Its not Harry's fault that Harry was conceived and its not Harry's fault that Snape and Dumbledore set Voldie on Lily and James. He's Snape's own son and that man . . . Agh! Okay, I'd probably be ranting for another hour if I kept going. Oh and I'm FURIOUS with Dumbledore too. Urg! I'm so mad I'm shaking. DEATH! KILL! REVENGE!! PROTECT THE HARRY!!

    Author's Response:

    Oh my - that's a pretty strong reaction!  When I was penning Snape, I didn't realize how much folks would dislike him... lol, but he really is being a prat, isn't he?  Dumbledore isn't far behind, either.  Things are going to be a bit rough for Harry in the beginning - he and Snape will really have to work at fitting each other into their respective lives.  But, if it's any consolation, it's not going to be easy for Snape, either.  :-)  Thanks very much for the review.

Title: Chapter 3 16 Sep 2008 10:04 pm
Reviewer: dragonero (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic! I love the way snape deals with that! I am looking forward to harry´s reaction, once he realizes that it´s not a joke!

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, Harry's in for a bit of a shocker in Dumbledore's office...  Glad you like it!

Title: Chapter 3 16 Sep 2008 7:18 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I have to add one more comment! I really hope that Snape DOES remove Harry's glamour in a way; although I hope that Harry DOESN'T inherit the big nose!

    I think that if Snape actually can see that Harry is his son visually, then maybe he'll start to develop some paternal feelings for him. Normally, I would agree that I would want him to look more like Lilly, but since he was not in love with Lilly, and is already resenting the fact that Harry is is son, and he has to take responsibility for him against his will; I think that if Harry resembles himself more; there is a better chance that Snape will eventually accept him. After all, who can resist seeing a mini version of themselves.

    I'm guessing also that Caden, and his wife are dead, and something tragic happened to them; so maybe if Harry looks more him, Snape will grow to accept him more quickly, than if he was a James Potter lookalike!

    Author's Response: The nose is a curse for sure, isn't it??  Holy cow, Harry would have an absolute bird if he ended up looking like Snape!  hahah... fun, fun, fun...
Title: Chapter 3 16 Sep 2008 2:39 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Your Severus is really a vile person and Dumbledore is pretty bad too. I like it. It is a nice change. I hope Harry won't forgive them anytime soon. Update, pls. Little-sun

    Author's Response:

    hahah... you're funny, little-sun.  I like a character with a little bite, too.  Which means that, in addition to Snape, we'll probably see Harry developing a bit of an attitude before he starts coming to terms with the events.  No huggin' and kissin' and makin' up in this fic... well, I mean... at least not right away...

     


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