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Reviews For Father of Mine
Title: Chapter 6 30 Nov 2017 2:18 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    He hadn’t known he would need to provide a blood sample, and he felt cornered.
    For a second I thought that the cornered was concerned, for a moment, I thought that at last, Snape was concerned, but you quickly crushed those hopes.
    Anyway, I love your ending line! Such a nice close for a tension packed chapter!
Title: Chapter 6 23 Apr 2009 6:10 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL I LOVE the Quibbler reporter. Freaking HILARIOUS!

    Author's Response: lol... her part in the chapter was short, but it was fun to envision and write Betsy.  Maybe I'll drag her back into it somewhere...  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 6 23 Apr 2009 6:03 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my goodness, that's so sad... Stupid Rita. Good grief. I loved your Quibbler reporter as well as Alios, especially when he says, "You’re asking me to explain the birds and bees, Minister?" Alios asked innocently. Absolutely hilarious.

    I wonder if Harry will believe Skeeter and if he'll bring these questions up to Snape. I imagine it's something Snape would get angry about, but perhaps Harry needs to know.

    Great chapter--I love your writing!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Glad you like it.  Yes, Harry's going to have to bring it up with Snape.  And although Snape might be reluctant to discuss it, he'll have to deal with it, too.  Thanks for reading, and also for taking the time to review.  I appreciate it. :)

Title: Chapter 6 23 Dec 2008 2:50 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, it looks as though you've abandoned this story. Too bad it had so much potential. I dont' suppose that you'll even see this review, but if you're still around and see this, please update soon!

    Author's Response: Nope, not abandoned at all.  Just struggled with Chap 7, and with time constraints imposed by real life.  Hope you like. :-)
Title: Chapter 6 16 Dec 2008 6:14 pm
Reviewer: C. Farrell (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh I hate cliff hangers. :(
    One thing that i do like about this story is how you write Snape as being quite possessive of Harry even though he of course doesn't realise it. Poor Harry. I also thought that idea of writing in the flashback was brillant and gave the chapter a bit of context and familiarity. Although Mr. Alios reminded me a bit too much of Mr. Weasley though. One question though ~what's "Graceland"?

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review - glad you like it.  hmmm... i hadn't considered Alios as compared to Mr. Weasley, but now that you mention it, I see it too.  I'll have to consider what to do with that.  Oh, and Graceland is Elvis Presley's ancestral home, which is located in Tennessee, USA.  It's supposed to have a "jungle room," although I can't say for sure b/c, not being much of an Elvis fan, I wasn't too inclined to research it further.  I just liked it b/c it sounds very unsnape-ish.  :)
Title: Chapter 6 16 Nov 2008 2:13 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, have you abandoned this story? It is just too good for that to be so.

    Please update soon. I don't even know if you'll see this review, but I'm hoping that you will, and that you will be inspired to continue this great story! :)

    Author's Response: No, not abandoned at all.  I was working on the next chapter today, in fact.  It's a very busy time of year though, and the weeks have slipped by much more quickly than I could have imagined.  Will hopefully update soon.
Title: Chapter 6 16 Oct 2008 10:21 pm
Reviewer: Luna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    To alter the nature,the very DNA of a foetus...it's abominable.Lily,Severus,Dumbledore,James...all four, are monsters.Sorry,I would have understood a simple charm,but this...I dread to think of it.And nobody in the story seem to realize(or care for) the gravity of the situation......it's too irrational... unrealistic.Reactions,behaviours...the whole psychological survey.I hope the biological alteration of the DNA will result a false alarm...
    However you are a good writer,I hope you'll continue this...with less OOC-ness, a bit more humanity for poor Harry and realism.
    Sorry,I did not mean to criticize you,it's only a suggestion.
    I love sevitus and the father-son relationship.Thanks for writing.

    Author's Response: No apologies necessary. :)  The premise is different than a lot of other sevitus stories, so I understand your views.  And you are absolutely right - they haven't really given much thought to their actions, or how those actions bear upon Harry.  But, maybe we'll see that change as we move along...  As for OOC-ness and the story in general, I'm not sure how much that will change, but maybe I'll throw in an OOC warning on just to be on the safe side.  Thanks for the review. 
Title: Chapter 6 13 Oct 2008 6:49 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story. I was so happy to see a new chapter. Please continue to write. No need to make Snape tonice

    Author's Response: Thank you. :-)
Title: Chapter 6 11 Oct 2008 4:17 am
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Keep up the good work! We're all waiting for more. :D

    "Professor Snape - Betsy Bothers from the Quibbler - is it true you have another child named Ziggy, and that he lives with you and his mother, Moon Beam, in a secret love-shack by the sea?"

    Bwhaha. Snape can withstand all sorts of things... but make him ridiculous at your own peril!

    Author's Response: lol, yeah.  I was trying to figure out the most unsnape-ish thing for her to say when my son flashed me the peace sign (guess that' better than the other digit, right?).  All the credit goes to him.
Title: Chapter 6 10 Oct 2008 7:59 am
Reviewer: holler (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great story, i read this instead of studyin
    thanks
    lol
    i hope harry doesnt take off the illusion, i hate when ppl change his appearence

    Author's Response: oh no.  I'm contributing to academic delinquency.  Go back to studying right now...!!!!  lol.  just kidding - thanks for the review.

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