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Reviews For Father of Mine
For a second I thought that the cornered was concerned, for a moment, I thought that at last, Snape was concerned, but you quickly crushed those hopes. Anyway, I love your ending line! Such a nice close for a tension packed chapter!
Author's Response: lol... her part in the chapter was short, but it was fun to envision and write Betsy. Maybe I'll drag her back into it somewhere... Thanks for the review!
I wonder if Harry will believe Skeeter and if he'll bring these questions up to Snape. I imagine it's something Snape would get angry about, but perhaps Harry needs to know. Great chapter--I love your writing! -P.G. Author's Response: Glad you like it. Yes, Harry's going to have to bring it up with Snape. And although Snape might be reluctant to discuss it, he'll have to deal with it, too. Thanks for reading, and also for taking the time to review. I appreciate it. :)
Author's Response: Nope, not abandoned at all. Just struggled with Chap 7, and with time constraints imposed by real life. Hope you like. :-)
One thing that i do like about this story is how you write Snape as being quite possessive of Harry even though he of course doesn't realise it. Poor Harry. I also thought that idea of writing in the flashback was brillant and gave the chapter a bit of context and familiarity. Although Mr. Alios reminded me a bit too much of Mr. Weasley though. One question though ~what's "Graceland"? Author's Response: Thanks for the review - glad you like it. hmmm... i hadn't considered Alios as compared to Mr. Weasley, but now that you mention it, I see it too. I'll have to consider what to do with that. Oh, and Graceland is Elvis Presley's ancestral home, which is located in Tennessee, USA. It's supposed to have a "jungle room," although I can't say for sure b/c, not being much of an Elvis fan, I wasn't too inclined to research it further. I just liked it b/c it sounds very unsnape-ish. :)
Please update soon. I don't even know if you'll see this review, but I'm hoping that you will, and that you will be inspired to continue this great story! :) Author's Response: No, not abandoned at all. I was working on the next chapter today, in fact. It's a very busy time of year though, and the weeks have slipped by much more quickly than I could have imagined. Will hopefully update soon.
However you are a good writer,I hope you'll continue this...with less OOC-ness, a bit more humanity for poor Harry and realism. Sorry,I did not mean to criticize you,it's only a suggestion. I love sevitus and the father-son relationship.Thanks for writing. Author's Response: No apologies necessary. :) The premise is different than a lot of other sevitus stories, so I understand your views. And you are absolutely right - they haven't really given much thought to their actions, or how those actions bear upon Harry. But, maybe we'll see that change as we move along... As for OOC-ness and the story in general, I'm not sure how much that will change, but maybe I'll throw in an OOC warning on just to be on the safe side. Thanks for the review.
Author's Response: Thank you. :-)
"Professor Snape - Betsy Bothers from the Quibbler - is it true you have another child named Ziggy, and that he lives with you and his mother, Moon Beam, in a secret love-shack by the sea?" Bwhaha. Snape can withstand all sorts of things... but make him ridiculous at your own peril! Author's Response: lol, yeah. I was trying to figure out the most unsnape-ish thing for her to say when my son flashed me the peace sign (guess that' better than the other digit, right?). All the credit goes to him.
thanks lol i hope harry doesnt take off the illusion, i hate when ppl change his appearence Author's Response: oh no. I'm contributing to academic delinquency. Go back to studying right now...!!!! lol. just kidding - thanks for the review. |
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