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Title: Chapter 8 23 Apr 2009 6:22 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay for Ron coming! I hope Harry's holiday gets better!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Yep... he deserves a break. Thanks for the review.
Title: Chapter 8 07 Apr 2009 8:23 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Just found your story and have been crying my eyes out. You're good.

    Looking forward to your next chapter.
    V

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  Next chapter is almost done - will hopefully be out by the weekend.  :)

Title: Chapter 8 07 Apr 2009 2:45 am
Reviewer: Rosa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Really nice story. I like your Snape. Can't wait to see what happened with his wife and child. Thanks!

    Author's Response: Snape is fun to write, so it's good to hear that you like him.  Thanks very much for the review!
Title: Chapter 8 06 Apr 2009 11:15 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I'm glad to see another update! I really like this story. Sev has a lot to learn about being a father, doesn't he?

    And I feel so badly for poor Harry. I wouldn't blame him a bit for being very angry and upset still with Dumbledore.

    But I'm glad to see that Harry is going to have his friends for company.

    I hope you'll be able to update again soon!

    Author's Response:

    Life's been a zoo lately, and the story has unfortunately taken a back-seat to reality, which is why the updates have been slow coming.  Hopefully I'll get myself together though :).  Severus definitely has a lot to learn about being a father to Harry.  Severus, being who he is, isn't new to dealing with children and adolescents; however, Harry's circumstances are outside the realm of his present experiences, so it will be a challenge for him how to figure out what Harry requires, and how to adapt his skills to suit those needs.  And Harry's baggage isn't very light, either, so it will be a learning experience for both.  Hope you continue to read and enjoy... I appreciate the review very much.

Title: Chapter 8 06 Apr 2009 9:17 am
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Personally I think you let Harry forgive the Headmaster to soon in a way. Considering the time period I would have expected Harry's reply to Dumbledore's wish to be more like "Not anytime soon".

    Author's Response: ah, darn.  I had a passage that talked about this point, but I cut it b/c I couldn't quite get it right, and b/c I was just too tired to try anymore.  But, the long and short is, Harry hasn't forgiven Dumbledore yet - he's struggling with the idea of wanting to forgive him, to "go back" as it were, to the way he used to feel about the Headmaster, and dealing with the reality of the Headmaster's manipulations.  Maybe I'll try and add it into the next chapter, in hopes that it will shed more insight into Harry's thinking.  I envision him as somewhat lost and unsure of who to trust, but also desperately in need of some stability from the people around him.  Will try to clarify it next chap.  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 8 06 Apr 2009 7:55 am
Reviewer: FawkesSong (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't blame Harry for trying to run away!

    Author's Response: lol, no kidding!  He's got a lot to escape from, does't he?  But it will get better for him.  Thanks very much for the review.  This story's taking me a lot longer to write than I had envisioned, and the feedback is encouraging. :)

    Author's Response: lol, no kidding!  He's got a lot to escape from, does't he?  But it will get better for him.  Thanks very much for the review.  This story's taking me a lot longer to write than I had envisioned, and the feedback is encouraging. :)
Title: Chapter 8 06 Apr 2009 4:18 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I'm so glad that you're back, and I was very happy to see that you'd updated. I always thought that this story had potential and I'm glad that you've not abandoned it.

    Author's Response: Thanks... it's good to be back.  Story's not abandoned, I just don't have as much time to write as when I first started.  lol, funny how that happens, isn't it?  Thanks for the review - I always look forward to seeing your name. :)

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