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Title: Chapter 9 25 Apr 2009 1:24 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I know that I've already reviewed, but I have to make an observation. I can't see on two counts, where Harry is really Cadon. First of all, why would Severus hide Cadon as Harry Potter, when he would be in even more danger. Also, I don't think that he would hate Harry so much if Harry were really his wife's
    son.

    Of course, it's your story, so who knows what brilliant plot you have up your sleeve. I'm so so curious. Please update soon!

    Author's Response:

    Very good observations... I hope you don't mind, however, if I don't elaborate beyond that.  ;)  Thanks for letting me know your thoughts ... there's kind of a funny situation with this.  I can't say it right now, but if you remind me when the fics all over, I'll let you in on it...

Title: Chapter 9 24 Apr 2009 9:06 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    A nice chapter :) Even with the lack of Severus in it :) Mila

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  He'll be back next chapter.  Thanks for the review. :)

Title: Chapter 9 24 Apr 2009 8:23 am
Reviewer: Missy Eye (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oooo this is a really intersting fic! im glad i read it!!
    Please update soon!!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you read it, too!  And more importantly, I'm happy to hear that you like it.  Thanks for letting me know.  :)
Title: Chapter 9 24 Apr 2009 3:48 am
Reviewer: chmcm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am really enjoying your story.

    Author's Response: Thank you.  Hope you continue to read and enjoy.
Title: Chapter 9 24 Apr 2009 1:30 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I'm so happy that Harry was able to have a happy Christmas after all. Loved the interaction between Harry and Ron, and the twins were spot-on, too!

    What a surprise ending there! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: yeah, poor kid deserved to have a good day, after the rotten time he's had.  ;)  Hopefully the next chapter be ready in a week or so.  Thanks very much for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 9 23 Apr 2009 9:39 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice!!

    Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Title: Chapter 9 23 Apr 2009 8:44 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    That's kinda sweet...I like!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  Snape might understand Harry a bit more than either of them realize!

Title: Chapter 9 23 Apr 2009 6:57 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, very powerful there at the end. I wonder what Harry will say to Snape when he comes back. I really enjoyed how kind Ron was in this chapter and the antics of the twins--you have them spot-on. One suggestion would be to change "ok" and "o.k." into "okay," which just looks a bit better and less like an abbreviation. Anyway, I've really enjoyed your writing and I hope you update soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    I think out of all the characters in the books, Ron's the one that would be most supportive of Harry.  Mainly b/c the Weasley family dynamic suggests that Ron would know, more than most people, that we don't get to choose our family. 

    As for "ok" - it's a great suggestion, and it definitely looks much better fully written out ... I'll make the change going forward.  If you have any other constructive thoughts on my writing, please, please feel free to let me know.  This is my first foray into writing anything substantial (and for others to read), so tips, hints, suggestions, etc. are very welcome. 

Title: Chapter 9 23 Apr 2009 6:14 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    When do we find out about Cadon?

    Author's Response:

    That's a very tough question.  There's something else that has to happen before we get to him, but I don't have the details of that event quite worked out yet.  You'll definitely get his story, though, because it's important to Snape and Harry's relationship.  Thanks for the review.

Title: Chapter 9 23 Apr 2009 2:58 pm
Reviewer: gin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    lily isnt harry' mother.im really sorry for harry.its Christmas and snape not with him.poor boy.he thinks snape hate him because for mother' died.when snape open his eyes and saw his real son.
    please update soon.

    Author's Response:

    hmm... Rita Skeeter thinks that Harry is Snape's original son, which would mean that Lily wasn't his mother.  But we know that Rita's not always concerned with getting her facts straight.  But then again, she does sometimes get it right.  As the saying goes, "Even a blind squirrel gets a nut now and then."  We'll see in a few chapters... :)  Thanks you for reviewing!!


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