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Title: Chapter 3 16 Sep 2008 7:18 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I have to add one more comment! I really hope that Snape DOES remove Harry's glamour in a way; although I hope that Harry DOESN'T inherit the big nose!

    I think that if Snape actually can see that Harry is his son visually, then maybe he'll start to develop some paternal feelings for him. Normally, I would agree that I would want him to look more like Lilly, but since he was not in love with Lilly, and is already resenting the fact that Harry is is son, and he has to take responsibility for him against his will; I think that if Harry resembles himself more; there is a better chance that Snape will eventually accept him. After all, who can resist seeing a mini version of themselves.

    I'm guessing also that Caden, and his wife are dead, and something tragic happened to them; so maybe if Harry looks more him, Snape will grow to accept him more quickly, than if he was a James Potter lookalike!

    Author's Response: The nose is a curse for sure, isn't it??  Holy cow, Harry would have an absolute bird if he ended up looking like Snape!  hahah... fun, fun, fun...
Title: Chapter 3 16 Sep 2008 2:39 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Your Severus is really a vile person and Dumbledore is pretty bad too. I like it. It is a nice change. I hope Harry won't forgive them anytime soon. Update, pls. Little-sun

    Author's Response:

    hahah... you're funny, little-sun.  I like a character with a little bite, too.  Which means that, in addition to Snape, we'll probably see Harry developing a bit of an attitude before he starts coming to terms with the events.  No huggin' and kissin' and makin' up in this fic... well, I mean... at least not right away...

     

Title: Chapter 1 16 Sep 2008 2:19 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I like this fic. I like your language, fluent and rich.

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Writing is always great fun.  :)
Title: Chapter 3 16 Sep 2008 3:47 am
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. I liked it. Keep it up

    Author's Response: Thanks.  Oh, and from one Kristie to another Kristi... GREAT NAME!
Title: Chapter 3 16 Sep 2008 2:33 am
Reviewer: L (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story so far, I really love harry and snape angsty fics lol. The only thing is that I hope if Harry's appearance does change that he looks like Lily instead of Snape (except for the black hair of course) But update soon! I can't wait for more :)

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, I love Harry/Snape angst, too...  lol, like you couldn't tell, huh?  As for his appearance, the illusion is complicated, and even if it's removed, no one is sure what the outcome will be.  Sooo... we'll just have to see 1.) if Snape removes it; and 2.) if he does, what the effect on Harry will be...

     Hope you continue to enjoy it. :)

Title: Chapter 3 16 Sep 2008 12:14 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Another interesting chapter. You have done a good job of setting up why Severus would have still been so nasty to Harry--he figures he's been damaged by the decisions made and I assume there is even more basis for his feelings left unrevealed at this time. I really hate it when Harry and Severus are at odds, but on the other hand the resolution doesn't feel as nice if we don't have realistic change. I look forward to finding out what you have planned.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, and I'm glad you're enjoying it.  Severus' feelings towards Harry are complicated - more complicated than even he realizes.  You're right - he doesn't like the idea of dealing with any potential problems that might arise, but not because any physical or magical imbalances, as such.  He just doesn't want to have to face the consequences of an arguably selfish decision that he made a long time ago.  It's always a bummer when we see the negative consequences of our actions, isn't it?

    Thanks again for taking the time to review.  It's nice to hear your thoughts.  :)

Title: Chapter 3 15 Sep 2008 10:38 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Harry; wait till Dumbledore verifies that Snape is in fact his father! Harry will surely fall apart.

    Can't wait for the next update, which I hope will be soon.

    Author's Response:

    It's difficult not to feel sorry for him right now, since absolutely nothing is going his way.  lol, but hey, that means it can only get better, right?  Next update will hopefully be next weekend.

Title: Chapter 3 15 Sep 2008 10:28 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very interesting indeed. I like the touch of Snape being married and a father already. But won't his wife tell Voldie?

    Author's Response:

    Maybe... if she's still alive...

Title: Chapter 3 15 Sep 2008 10:26 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very interesting indeed.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! 

Title: Chapter 3 15 Sep 2008 9:53 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Update, update, I have to find out more about Caden (and the unknown woman).

    Author's Response: lol, thanks.  More to follow soon...

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