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Reviews For Father of Mine
Author's Response: Glad you like it. :)
Author's Response: thanks!
Author's Response: lol, thanks! Most likely this weekend.
Author's Response: Thanks very much. It's good to know that it reads well. :-)
I feel very sorry for Harry. You probably already have his reaction planned, but I do hope that your Harry is not going to be so needy for a family that he accepts Snape and immediately loves him, no matter how horrible Snape is to him. How about for a change if Harry calmly accepts Snape as his father, but determines just to learn everything he can from the man and then never see him again once he's graduated from Hogwards. Of course, then if you want, the two of them can develop a relationship. It's just that I've read too many of these stories lately where Harry continues to hope for a father no matter what Snape does or else Snape turns into father of the year after one day. Sorry for ranting. This story does show great promise. Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Your ideas for Harry's reaction sound intersting, and he can definitely learn from Snape. But you'll have to stay tuned if you want to see what happens. I will say, however, that Snape is going to be much less than perfect, and Harry will struggle with the idea of family. After all, he's never really had one, has he? Hope you continue to enjoy...
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and glad to hear you're enjoying it.
I hate when Snape is to soft and mushy; although I hope he gets a LITTLE nicer to Harry without becoming Mother Theresa. I just love that reference to Star Wars, and Harry`s reaction. Just perfect, and really realistic. I could just imagine Harry in canon having the same reaction. Please update soon, this story is very promising. Can`t wait to see how Harry handles the fact that he really IS Snape`s son, and the circumstances behind it. Author's Response: lol. Nope, not kidding at all - Snape is not being very nice right now. Some people can write a warm-fuzzy Snape, but I would have a hard time making that work. So, he'll stay a bit (or, maybe more than a bit...) snarky though this story. But maybe he'll lighten up a little... ;) Hope you continue to enjoy it.
I say "actually" because I rarely am this optimistic at the start of a fan fiction. Something is usually distracting about them—poor quality writing, OOC characters, unrealistically portrayed plots/reactions/situations, too slow moving, too fast moving...etc. This, however, is exceedingly well written and very promising. Harry's reaction was perfect. :D PERFECT. I mean, what do you even SAY when someone tells you something so (in your mind) ludicrous? It's an incomprehensibly bizarre situation. I hate it when they both just go "We're father and son? You mean that? Wow, this is really strange, but okay." I mean, really. I lost it on this line..."No, Luke...I am your father". Bwahaha. So I take it Harry is no being deliberately self-destructive with the broom stunts? At least, not yet. (If you don't want to answer this, plot-wise, that's fine.) Poor Harry. You just want to give him a hug. Not that that would solve that much, but still. Anyway, I'm giving you five stars. Can't wait to see how this goes! Author's Response: Glad to hear that you like it, and thanks very much for the five stars! I just couldn't see him getting worked up enough to actually believe Snape... not without any evidence, that is. And no, Harry wasn't being deliberately self-destructive. I think, though, that the stunts suggest he is not always aware of how others (particularly adults) view his actions, and also that he does not place a high priority on his own personal safety. Poor kid is right. Anyway, next update should be around the weekend or so.
Author's Response: awww... my very first "whoot"! Thank you!!!
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