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Reviews For Father of Mine
Title: Chapter 10 09 Aug 2009 9:15 pm
Reviewer: thedeejay (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh ace story :) really well done

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 10 09 Aug 2009 5:24 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter--I love the angst at the end. Please update soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: lol - angst is fun to write.  Thanks for reviewing. :)
Title: Chapter 10 09 Aug 2009 8:39 am
Reviewer: Min (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 10 09 Aug 2009 6:53 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I'm so so glad to see that you've updated. I've loved this story from the beginning, and I thought maybe you weren't going to continue.

    I'm really curious what happened on Snape's trip, and I'm just a little curious to see what would happen if the glamour were removed. I'm surprised that Snape is still calling him Potter. He insists that Harry call him father, but then Snape calls him by his enemy's last name.

    Ooh, please update soon. :)

    Author's Response:

    oh my goodness, Pandora... you're one heck of a fast reviewer!!  Thank you for always taking the time to offer an opinion. :)  I've no intention of abandoning, RL just taking up much more of my time these days.  Sadly, I might add.  As for Snape, I don't envision him being able to address Harry on a first name basis yet... to much water under the bridge for that kind of familiarity - at least not yet.  But forcing Harry to call him "father" is sort of a control issue... he knows that it costs Harry something to say it, and he's not above using it as a means of exerting authority.  Sadistic s.o.b., (but I still love him).  :-)

Title: Chapter 9 25 Apr 2009 1:24 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I know that I've already reviewed, but I have to make an observation. I can't see on two counts, where Harry is really Cadon. First of all, why would Severus hide Cadon as Harry Potter, when he would be in even more danger. Also, I don't think that he would hate Harry so much if Harry were really his wife's
    son.

    Of course, it's your story, so who knows what brilliant plot you have up your sleeve. I'm so so curious. Please update soon!

    Author's Response:

    Very good observations... I hope you don't mind, however, if I don't elaborate beyond that.  ;)  Thanks for letting me know your thoughts ... there's kind of a funny situation with this.  I can't say it right now, but if you remind me when the fics all over, I'll let you in on it...

Title: Chapter 9 24 Apr 2009 9:06 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    A nice chapter :) Even with the lack of Severus in it :) Mila

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  He'll be back next chapter.  Thanks for the review. :)

Title: Chapter 7 24 Apr 2009 8:32 am
Reviewer: Missy Eye (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great chpter!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 9 24 Apr 2009 8:23 am
Reviewer: Missy Eye (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oooo this is a really intersting fic! im glad i read it!!
    Please update soon!!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you read it, too!  And more importantly, I'm happy to hear that you like it.  Thanks for letting me know.  :)
Title: Chapter 9 24 Apr 2009 3:48 am
Reviewer: chmcm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am really enjoying your story.

    Author's Response: Thank you.  Hope you continue to read and enjoy.
Title: Chapter 9 24 Apr 2009 1:30 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I'm so happy that Harry was able to have a happy Christmas after all. Loved the interaction between Harry and Ron, and the twins were spot-on, too!

    What a surprise ending there! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: yeah, poor kid deserved to have a good day, after the rotten time he's had.  ;)  Hopefully the next chapter be ready in a week or so.  Thanks very much for reviewing!

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