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Reviews For Father of Mine
Title: Chapter 9 23 Apr 2009 9:39 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice!!

    Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Title: Chapter 9 23 Apr 2009 8:44 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    That's kinda sweet...I like!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  Snape might understand Harry a bit more than either of them realize!

Title: Chapter 9 23 Apr 2009 6:57 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, very powerful there at the end. I wonder what Harry will say to Snape when he comes back. I really enjoyed how kind Ron was in this chapter and the antics of the twins--you have them spot-on. One suggestion would be to change "ok" and "o.k." into "okay," which just looks a bit better and less like an abbreviation. Anyway, I've really enjoyed your writing and I hope you update soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    I think out of all the characters in the books, Ron's the one that would be most supportive of Harry.  Mainly b/c the Weasley family dynamic suggests that Ron would know, more than most people, that we don't get to choose our family. 

    As for "ok" - it's a great suggestion, and it definitely looks much better fully written out ... I'll make the change going forward.  If you have any other constructive thoughts on my writing, please, please feel free to let me know.  This is my first foray into writing anything substantial (and for others to read), so tips, hints, suggestions, etc. are very welcome. 

Title: Chapter 8 23 Apr 2009 6:22 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay for Ron coming! I hope Harry's holiday gets better!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Yep... he deserves a break. Thanks for the review.
Title: Chapter 7 23 Apr 2009 6:14 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm...what sort of business does Snape have to take care of? I like how Harry reacted and apologized to Snape about the loss of his family. I hope that Harry will see that Snape does seem to be trying with him, especially when he finds out Ron will be visiting. Great chapter!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: oohhh, you're the first person to ask me that question!  lol, but I can't say.  Sorry!  Of course, that tells you that it's important, though...  Glad you liked the chapter.
Title: Chapter 9 23 Apr 2009 6:14 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    When do we find out about Cadon?

    Author's Response:

    That's a very tough question.  There's something else that has to happen before we get to him, but I don't have the details of that event quite worked out yet.  You'll definitely get his story, though, because it's important to Snape and Harry's relationship.  Thanks for the review.

Title: Chapter 6 23 Apr 2009 6:10 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL I LOVE the Quibbler reporter. Freaking HILARIOUS!

    Author's Response: lol... her part in the chapter was short, but it was fun to envision and write Betsy.  Maybe I'll drag her back into it somewhere...  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 6 23 Apr 2009 6:03 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my goodness, that's so sad... Stupid Rita. Good grief. I loved your Quibbler reporter as well as Alios, especially when he says, "You’re asking me to explain the birds and bees, Minister?" Alios asked innocently. Absolutely hilarious.

    I wonder if Harry will believe Skeeter and if he'll bring these questions up to Snape. I imagine it's something Snape would get angry about, but perhaps Harry needs to know.

    Great chapter--I love your writing!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Glad you like it.  Yes, Harry's going to have to bring it up with Snape.  And although Snape might be reluctant to discuss it, he'll have to deal with it, too.  Thanks for reading, and also for taking the time to review.  I appreciate it. :)

Title: Chapter 4 23 Apr 2009 5:54 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Shiiiiit. Snape is SCARY!!! Total bastard. If I were Harry I'd be running to the dark lord for help!

    Author's Response:

    LOL... omg, that's so funny.  You really made me laugh with this review!

Title: Chapter 3 23 Apr 2009 5:44 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    'Don't let your mind wander...It's too small to be out on its own' ROFL

    Author's Response: hahaha... sounds kind of like a Snape-ish thing to say, doesn't it?  Thanks for reviewing. :)

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