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Reviews For Father of Mine
-P.G. Author's Response: Glad to hear it's believable! Snape knows that Harry is his, but he's on edge because 1.) it's been a crappy week for him; and 2.) he's worried that the Minister might somehow get custody of Harry, notwithstanding the fact that Harry is his son. Snape doesn't want custody of Harry, but he really, really doesn't want Fudge to have him. It would be disastrous.
Author's Response: well, he sure doesn't want Harry. Which is really pretty rotten, but that's Snape (for now, at least). Glad you like it, and thanks for the review.
please update soon. Author's Response: hmm... Rita Skeeter thinks that Harry is Snape's original son, which would mean that Lily wasn't his mother. But we know that Rita's not always concerned with getting her facts straight. But then again, she does sometimes get it right. As the saying goes, "Even a blind squirrel gets a nut now and then." We'll see in a few chapters... :) Thanks you for reviewing!!
Very interesting fic--I'm still very curious about Severus' family. -P.G. Author's Response: lol - see that? case made for the beta reader!! Thanks for pointing it out - I'll try and tidy it up with the next update. I like the soothing charm, too... it seems like it might provide a mechanism to get the two characters more connected, so I expect it will be around in future chapters. Thanks for reviewing!
I kind of feel Harry's pain after what he saw. I can't believe they'd test something so uncertain on him, as an unborn baby, no less. Anyway, the poor boy is about to have a reality check when he finds out his worst nightmare is coming to life! This is very well-written and detailed; I'm enjoying every word! -P.G. Author's Response: lol... can't reveal too much now, can I?? Answers are on the way, I promise... And yes, Harry's not pleased to see how casual others have been about manipulating his life. He's in a bit of a hard spot, though, because those people - Dumbledore, his parents (meaning, loosely, Lily and James), and to a small degree, maybe even Snape - are the same people that he has previously loved, trusted and/or relied upon to some extent. Talk about being conflicted. Thanks for the review!
Very delightful! -P.G. Author's Response: Thank you. It's much more fun to write when you know others are enjoying it, too. :)
A tip from me would be to get a beta. You seem to be a very good writer, but there are a few mistakes here and there that a beta would catch, making this nearly perfect. Also, I'd question whether or not Snape would really bang his head on the desk. I don't think he would, though it did make me smile when it happened because it was so unexpected. I can tell this is going to be a great story! -P.G. Author's Response: Glad you like it! I've thought about a beta, but truthfully, I don't have the faintest idea how to go about finding one. You are, however, completely correct ... there are always (at least) a few mistakes in each chapter. It's maddening to look back and find them, but they're definitely there. If you happen to know anyone who's available, and who might like to work on this story, would you mind letting me know? It would be a huge benefit to have a second set of eyes prior to posting. Thanks very much for the review...hope you continue to read and enjoy it.
Oh, please update soon. I'm really anxious to see what happens when Snape comes back. Author's Response: well... it could mean that Lily's not his mother, but the first question that needs answered is whether Harry is Snape's original son. And we won't know that for a few chapters... argh, but I really, really want to get to that chapter b/c I think it will be fun to write. We just have to get through the preliminary stuff... :) Thanks for your thoughts and (as always) for taking the time to review!
Looking forward to your next chapter. V Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter is almost done - will hopefully be out by the weekend. :)
Author's Response: Snape is fun to write, so it's good to hear that you like him. Thanks very much for the review! |
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