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Reviews For Father of Mine
Title: Chapter 1 10 Oct 2008 6:30 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey this looks good! i like Snape's humaneness. oh, and it's really well written. (:

    Author's Response: Thanks.  Glad you like it. :)
Title: Chapter 5 10 Oct 2008 3:11 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Well. fudge just makes a third arm of a foul triumvirate. Why was Fudge so reluctant to say where HArry would be placed. I wonder if it is because he has got it into his head to place Mr Potter with the very well-to-do Malfoys. After all, the Malfoys have always been such wondeful supporters of the Ministry, what with all of those donations.

    I wonder why Sev is so reluctant.

    Author's Response: Nah, Malfoys' in Azkaban now.  But that would have been a very fun path to follow.  Sev is definiately reluctant.
Title: Chapter 3 10 Oct 2008 2:07 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Cruel, cruel Snape.

    Author's Response: Yes.
Title: Chapter 1 10 Oct 2008 1:17 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    It will be interesting to see just what the circumstances are concerning Sev's paternity of HArry. And so Harry Potter is no longer going to look like Harry Potter.

    If he is as self destructive as DD seems to think, I can imagine that these revelations will definitely push him over the edge.

    Still, interested enough to continue. You write very well.

    wrappedinharry

    Author's Response: Harry may change, but I can't really say right now.  And as for Dumbledore in this fic, well... it's best not to take everything he says at face value.  He doesn't lie, exactly, but he will have the tendency to tell people what he thinks they want and/or need to hear.  Thanks for the compliment on the writing.
Title: Chapter 6 10 Oct 2008 7:59 am
Reviewer: holler (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great story, i read this instead of studyin
    thanks
    lol
    i hope harry doesnt take off the illusion, i hate when ppl change his appearence

    Author's Response: oh no.  I'm contributing to academic delinquency.  Go back to studying right now...!!!!  lol.  just kidding - thanks for the review.
Title: Chapter 6 10 Oct 2008 2:13 am
Reviewer: Nyx the Panther (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Man oh man! That was interesting. I have to wonder though: Are Caden and his mother really dead or just in hiding? And if they are dead; Poor Sev. I have one more question, Will Sev start to like Harry in this story? Sorry if i bugged you. And again, GREAT WORK!

    Author's Response:

    Well, I can't really say too much, because it would take away from the story.  But it's fair to say that I like happy endings... does that set your mind at ease?  And you haven't bugged me at all.  I'm happy to answer any questions that I can. :)

Title: Chapter 6 09 Oct 2008 10:41 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good chapter, and ye evil cliffie!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  And sorry 'bout the cliff... I was just getting tired of writing and didn't want to drag the chapter out anymore than it already was. :)

Title: Chapter 4 09 Oct 2008 8:15 pm
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    You have Dumbledore handing Harry's wand over to Severus TWICE within three sentences, which is confusing.
    Between 17 and 19 paragraphs down is where the two handings-over take place.

    Author's Response: hmmm... you're right.  I was trying to express what Harry was feeling when he saw the wand handed to Snape, but it's not quite clear enough.  I'll have to go back and tidy that up.  Thanks for pointing it out.

    Author's Response: hmmm... you're right.  I was trying to express what Harry was feeling when he saw the wand handed to Snape, but it's not quite clear enough.  I'll have to go back and tidy that up.  Thanks for pointing it out.
Title: Chapter 6 09 Oct 2008 3:50 pm
Reviewer: Lisa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! I loved how you wrote the walk to the testing room, it was so intense.. and when Snape put his hand on Harry's shoulder it wasn't over done because it was in a Snape-ish way if that makes sense. Now you've got me wondering how Snape's wife and son died 14 years previous! Great work and update soon please :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 6 09 Oct 2008 3:22 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter you have here! And the end. OMG. You really know how to make a cliffie. Update soon, pls. Mila

    Author's Response: Glad you like it. :)  Thanks for the review.

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