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Title: Chapter 5 25 Sep 2008 12:04 pm
Reviewer: dragonero (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic! It´s great to see, that snape and harry are still at odds! Makes it more realistic!

    Author's Response: Glad you like it!  Harry and Snape have a lot to work through, and it's going to take them some time to come to terms things.  Hope you continue to enjoy.  :)
Title: Chapter 5 25 Sep 2008 8:27 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    You know, they should change the "To be continued" line to "To be continued SOON". I loved this chapter. Big serious issues taken seriously, but the omnipresent hint of humor and irony. It is very subtle, and for thus, very real and very readable. Mila

    Author's Response: That's really nice to hear!  One of the things I love most about the series is the humor that JK manages to incorporate into it - it's very honest and natural, and she's brilliant at it.  For me, humor doesn't come so easily, so it's good to hear that it's coming through without sounding contrived.  Thanks again for the review!
Title: Chapter 5 25 Sep 2008 6:53 am
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great Keep it up

    Author's Response: Thank you!  And thanks for the review. :-)
Title: Chapter 5 25 Sep 2008 6:26 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, I just thought of something. Will the charms or whatever they did to Harry as a baby, possibly affect the paternity test.

    Didn't Severus say that Harry really did have some of James' DNA?

    I really hope that it shows that Snape IS Harry's father; I want to see the smug look wiped off of Fudge's face!

    Author's Response: hahaha... good issue spotting, Pandora!
Title: Chapter 5 25 Sep 2008 6:22 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely. Great plot development!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 5 25 Sep 2008 6:17 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, two chapters!

    You got me a little scared there when Snape threatened to Harry that he would take the belt to him. I hope that this was really just an empty threat, and that Snape is just strict not abusive!

    Oh my goodness, I can't wait for your next update; I can't wait to see Harry and Fudge's reaction when the paternity test comes out positive. I just hope that nothing can stop Snape from getting custody. I definitely don't want Fudge to get custody.

    Harry doesn't realise that his best hope is with Snape--even if it doesn't feel that way now.

    Author's Response:

    arrgh, Pandora, I'm sorry... I totally forgot... I was thinking of you when I wrote this chapter, and I wanted to put a disclaimer at the beginning indicating that it's not a CP fic.  It was late when I posted though, and it just slipped my mind.  So, no CP in this fic (again, nothing against it, it's just not what this story needs).  That line was just Snape being Snape - as you said, "an empty threat."  But of course, my standard disclaimer still applies - Snape's not nice, he's not perfect, and he and Harry will hit rock bottom before things turn around... 

    Hope you continue to like it! 

Title: Chapter 4 25 Sep 2008 6:10 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah! Awesome!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  And I love your website.  :)

Title: Chapter 3 20 Sep 2008 11:43 am
Reviewer: janey (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great story, love it so far

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Glad you like it. 
Title: Chapter 3 19 Sep 2008 11:58 pm
Reviewer: Saigo (Anonymous) [Report This]
    *grabs Harry and hides him* I am absolutely seething furious at Snape. If I could, I'd slice him open right now and strangle him with his entrails. Its not Harry's fault that Harry was conceived and its not Harry's fault that Snape and Dumbledore set Voldie on Lily and James. He's Snape's own son and that man . . . Agh! Okay, I'd probably be ranting for another hour if I kept going. Oh and I'm FURIOUS with Dumbledore too. Urg! I'm so mad I'm shaking. DEATH! KILL! REVENGE!! PROTECT THE HARRY!!

    Author's Response:

    Oh my - that's a pretty strong reaction!  When I was penning Snape, I didn't realize how much folks would dislike him... lol, but he really is being a prat, isn't he?  Dumbledore isn't far behind, either.  Things are going to be a bit rough for Harry in the beginning - he and Snape will really have to work at fitting each other into their respective lives.  But, if it's any consolation, it's not going to be easy for Snape, either.  :-)  Thanks very much for the review.

Title: Chapter 3 16 Sep 2008 10:04 pm
Reviewer: dragonero (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic! I love the way snape deals with that! I am looking forward to harry´s reaction, once he realizes that it´s not a joke!

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, Harry's in for a bit of a shocker in Dumbledore's office...  Glad you like it!


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