Great banter between the two, though I do wish that Snape would restrain his tendencies to whack Harry, especially given Harry’s history.
This was a fantastic chapter. I love the banter between Harry and Snape and their insecurities there after.
| Title: Chapter 10
| 17 Sep 2008 1:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Ash (Signed)
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I am really liking it so far! I think Snape may be just a tad OC, but in this case it is a good thing, as you've changed the others for precisely that amount too so it works great! I am looking forward to more!
Oh the one tiny issue I have is I have no clue how old they are. I understood 12 from the beginning but you are mentioning things that are from older years in the books, so am just a tad confused.
Author's Response: I appreciate your taking the time to review! Thanks for your kind words, and I hope you enjoy the rest too. :) They are indeed 12, but since this is an AU story, don't be thrown if some knowledge doesn't adhere strictly to canon timelines. :) Hope that helps!
| Title: Chapter 10
| 15 Sep 2008 11:59 pm
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| Reviewer: mwc (Signed)
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love, love, love this fic. love your harry and snape. i love how they're slowly getting closer and closer. the last paragraph of ch 10 was awwwwwww-some. keep up the good work. =)
Author's Response: Thank you! Wow - I am so delighted by your kind words. I'm thrilled that you're enjoying it so much and I really appeciate your taking the time to tell me so! I'm sitting here with a huge smile as I type this!
Author's Response: Thank you! Wow - I am so delighted by your kind words. I'm thrilled that you're enjoying it so much and I really appeciate your taking the time to tell me so! I'm sitting here with a huge smile as I type this!
| Title: Chapter 10
| 15 Sep 2008 6:09 am
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| Reviewer: jolisgsd@gmail.com (Anonymous)
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Very good. This is a novel way of building the relationship between Snape and Harry. Good writing. Please keep posting.
Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you're enjoying it and like where it's going. I'll keep writing! :)
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