The two different perspectives offered by Dumbledore and Snape were fun to read! I love how you’ve included details like Severus noting the loss of his spare time. With those details comes a story full of depth and perspective. Thanks so much.
Snape is dead on at the end but also love that you got Hermione and ron down because it is true if Harry had Snape they could no longer have to worry about Harry.
amazign job
when I was eight me and my mum made shortbread biscuits, only we forgot to grease the paper and it stuck to the biscuits. I (being eight) decided to eat them anyway. The very thought of shortbread now makes me feel quite ill. this story is wonderfull, everyone is in charicter, (exept prehaps snape, who is, in my oppinion, as in charicter as it possable for him to be while giving harry cuddles!!!!) OK on to the next chapter!!!!
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