Snape at his best! He handled Weasley so adeptly. It was fun to read.
Another terrific chapter. Your writing is excellent. I loved the way Snape handled Malfoy, and hope this experience enables a truce of sorts between the boys.
This was such a wonderfully angsty and touching scene. Thanks so much.
I love this side of Ron - strategic, loyal, brave, and capable!
What a horrific experience. I wish Harry would say something, but I understand his insecurities. Great chapter!
I’m back for another read. This opening chapter was so nicely done, with a cliffhanger ending! I loved all the insights strewn throughout.
This was quite clever:
“Well then, we must assume it is unlikely to turn up. It’s not as if it walked away on its own.” Minerva gave Hermione a sharp look. “It didn’t, did it?”
“No, Professor. It wasn’t one of those books,” Hermione agreed.
What a wonderful story! Special mention for your depiction of Ron, which was original and insightful. But truly I loved everything here. Kudos.
Wow, Art of war according to Severus Snape. Doesn’t sugar coat, does he!
Wow, Art of war according to Severus Snape. Doesn’t sugar coat, does he!
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