| Title: Chapter 33
| 05 Apr 2016 8:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Brilliant story, Any chance you could continue,maybe have Snape adopt Harry and eventually get custody of Draco,
This is perhaps my favorite Shape adopts Harry story. Not only are the characters a wonderful read, but I LOVE that the basilisk survives.
| Title: Chapter 33
| 23 Jul 2014 7:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Guest (Anonymous)
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The story was awesome!!! Is there a sequel ?
This chapter seemed really rushed. It didn't have much description in it, only dialogue. It'd be a lot nicer if there was maybe a bit more description of thier surroundings and such.
Lol, me and Draco like the same kind of cookie. Yay for oatmeal raisin!
I really wish I had Snape's vocabulary. Just reading it makes me feel smarter. :)
I love how you've portrayed Snape. He's all the snary, sarcastic potions master I enjoy without being too mushy, like many writers tend to portray him. Your version of Snape is just the right mix. :D
Snape mentioned Dobby near the end of the chapter. Does he not belong to the Malfoys in this story?
Ron sure tends to jump to conclusions. I guess most kids do have active imaginations though. :)
| Title: Chapter 33
| 06 Sep 2013 4:08 pm
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| Reviewer: ali99 (Anonymous)
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I can't remember when I laugh so much last time. It was brilliant!
Oh,VERY well done! Lots of tears, tons of laughs!
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