well done Ron seriously is there a slytherin side of him we never knew about!!!!
and Malfoy awww Draco I love his chacter he is defintly insecure and i don't blame him having the father he does.
you write him well
awwww well done to both Hermionie and MAlfoy and Malfoy does have a soft side it just isn't shown often
wow leave it to Snape to praise in the least likely of times and he means it Ron's family all have strengths strengths we see of the younger ones especially through the books but it is true about Charlie and Bill and Percy too
awww Ron you are so parinoid Snape isn't evil hell he cares for the students
awesom job writing the uncertinty and fear from ron
bravo to ron though to be so slytherin
but sometimes he needs to realize that not everything is always what it seems
So it's about 5am, and I'm still reading. However, I needed to pause really quick to let you know that you're making it really hard to read while everyone else is asleep. I keep laughing out loud despite stifling attempts.
Oh, dear! Loved Ron's rapport with Myrtle. In fact, I rather like how you've portrayed him and the other characters.
Brilliant.
| Title: Chapter 33
| 28 Jun 2010 6:23 am
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| Reviewer: dorothy (Anonymous)
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great story! thanks for all the effort you clearly must have put into it, it was thoroughly enjoyable =)
| Title: Chapter 33
| 04 Jun 2010 7:37 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Great! I spent my whole day today reading your stories and they are just great! I do hope you write more of the encounter universe stories!
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