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Title: Brother, Can You Spare the Wine? 26 Mar 2009 11:55 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What an emotional charged chapter. The burial scene had me as tears as your words had us feeling the deep anguish felt by George as he lashed out at all around him. Wow.

    Author's Response: It was a little tense - I'm not used to writing anything but humour. Glad you found it touching, and thanks for reviewing!
Title: The Call Every Mother Dreads 26 Mar 2009 4:38 pm
Reviewer: BuckeyeBelle (Signed) [Report This]
    Very well written chapter. Extra points for using my favorite quote from To Kill a Mockingbird, Atticus' definition of real courage to Scout.

    Author's Response: I love that quote, too - the whole book, in fact, is a gold mine of them. I'm using the same one in another fic. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: The Last Full Measure of Devotion 30 Oct 2008 4:49 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    ""You've seen my memories, Potter. Are you going to tell me I didn't die a Gryffindor?" Snape answered." Great line! I'm very much enjoying Snape's combination of helpful suggestions and irritation. ;-)

    Author's Response: I want to get Snape and Harry talking, but I just didn't feel like they'd suddenly be best mates, not after all the bad blood between them. But now that Snape's actually making suggestions, they should move more into a mentoring relationship. He'll still make snarky comments, though. :o) Thanks for the review!
Title: The Last Full Measure of Devotion 21 Oct 2008 8:35 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    That last line was great!

    And Sev's idea for the memorial service was awesome, because it would take too much time to go to each and every funeral, if they could even have a funeral. Baby teddy is adorable, I laughed when he pulled Hermione's hair, my baby niece does that to me and pulls off my glasses.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reviewing! I'm overwhelmed with all that has to be done . . . and I don't even have to do it! Just write about it. Sev seemed to be a bit of a clown up until now, but he's really supposed to be helping Harry; I just had to get them talking somehow (like they really never did before). Teddy being around should be good for a little stress relief. Babies are into everything!

Title: The Call Every Mother Dreads 01 Oct 2008 2:46 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think I'm in love. Please can we have some more???

    Author's Response: Oh, it's coming. :o) Snape's not going anywhere, so this could go on for ages! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: The Call Every Mother Dreads 01 Oct 2008 12:15 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, I nearly cried on that one. My son, Kris, was stationed in Iraq for a year. Each day was waiting for night to come in order to go to bed for the next day.

    Author's Response:

    I can only imagine what it's like to have that fear pervading every moment of every day. I've heard it said that the "womenfolk" waiting at home have it the hardest, because they have nothing to occupy their minds. Granted, that was a pretty old-fashioned source, since there are plenty of women at the front now.

    DH was sad enough. I need to get back to humour. Thanks for reviewing!

Title: The Call Every Mother Dreads 30 Sep 2008 10:27 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww that was so sad. it reminded me of the way the officers of the soldiers would come to the door to tell the family that their son or daughter had died in the line of duty. I'm from a military background, though luckily none of my relatives died while serving their country.

    I'm glad Harry went in person to talk to Andromeda and Vera, instead of just sending a letter of condolence. And he was very good with Dennis too, his mother certainly did not need to lose both of her sons. (that's why family members are never placed together during wartime in the military as well)

    The two women should have much in common and be able to help each other.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reviewing! I had the Creeveys come back with them mostly so Andromeda would have some company. Harry will be very busy, and he'll likely live in the dorm for a while.

    I can't imagine having to deliver that message (or receive it, for that matter). Andromeda literally lost everyone: Ted, Dora, Remus, and her sister Bellatrix, although she'll probably get over that one fairly quickly. Both she and Vera deserved to get the message in person, I thought.

Title: And So It Begins 27 Sep 2008 1:07 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I kind of felt bad that Harry and Ron would find burying Snape a source of amusement. I mean, the man did die a hero. But I liked the part with Voldemort's body. And that last line was great!

    Author's Response: I think that in canon, it would have been a solemn occasion. But since he's ba-ack and seemingly no worse for wear, torturing Harry like usual, they can see the humour in it. He got his own back with that last line, too! And of course they would have snarky comments about getting rid of Voldy. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: And So It Begins 25 Sep 2008 7:09 pm
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    I just love Snape after all that he wants to be cremated LOL. I could see Sev and Harry becoming great friends with Sev haunting Harry for a while perfect revenge

    Author's Response:

    They'll most likely end up pretty close, even if they don't realize it's happening. Snape never really gave Harry a chance, but now they're pretty much stuck together. Like those survival games that help people bond. Only Severus has the advantage, since he can pop in whenever he likes. Thanks for your comments!

Title: And So It Begins 25 Sep 2008 6:08 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I needed a pick me up today and your story did it nicely. Enjoyed the dialogue between Snape and Harry and that last line was a hoot.

    Author's Response: I'm glad that made your day. :o) Sometimes when I'm having a hard time, I'll go online and hunt for stories to take my mind off things. The last line was my favourite, too! Thanks for reviewing!

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