| Title: Hi, Mum
| 15 Apr 2015 9:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely ending to the story
Awe
This almost made me cry...
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So sad! :) going to read the next one.
| Title: Hi, Mum
| 23 Jun 2011 11:34 am
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| Reviewer: abby (Anonymous)
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hi!
i have tears in my eys. its sp sweet and sad at the same time. i love this story!!!
Very well done! I particularly like how him being rescued by Severus isn't an instant cure for years of abuse.
And I think you've done a great job in keeping Snape's character true to the books, but his reactions to Harry changed just enough due to his recognition of what has been happening to Harry over the years since Lily and James' deaths.
I look forward to reading more of your writing!
This was just all so gorgeous, the first few were heartbreaking and so detailed it was sort of sickening (which is a good thing... I think ^^) and the last few were the best bits of fluff I've read in ages, the last line absolutely perfect. Thanks so much for that, I love your work ^^
have fun x
There's still a lump in my throat... I think I need to go and leave a tear-stain on someone's shoulder. Very emotional story.
Aw, it's finished?
Whatever you have planned after this, I'm really anxious to read. Again, I really like your descriptions and how you write your characters.
| Title: Hi, Mum
| 27 Apr 2009 6:38 pm
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| Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous)
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I'm so glad you finished this story. I like how Severus tries to make Harry understand that he doesn't have to cook or apologise for existing.
I'd just like to see the scene where Dubledore realizes that Harry is not at the Dursleys' anymore (I guess Harry is speaking about the headmaster when he tells Snape that someone made him go back to this realtives). Maybe you could write this scene as a one-shot?
Author's Response: Hmmm.... To tell the truth, I'd just conveniently placed Dumbledore out of my mind. But, yes, maybe I should deal with that. One day. As it is, it really is fary talesque in its simpllicity but I *like* that. =)
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