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Reviews For Hello, Magic
Title: Hi, Mum 06 Mar 2014 3:33 am
Reviewer: Dontgotaclue88 (Signed) [Report This]
    So sad! :) going to read the next one.
Title: Hi, Mum 23 Jun 2011 11:34 am
Reviewer: abby (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hi!
    i have tears in my eys. its sp sweet and sad at the same time. i love this story!!!
Title: Breakfast 13 Jul 2010 7:33 pm
Reviewer: M (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I've read all the chapters of this, and I want to snuggle them all. But I didn't want to review every single one because that would be overkill and it would be basically 8 seperate keyboard mashed reviews.

    However, the thing I loved most, and this is kind of weird, is Severus being vegetarian. It's that kind of seemingly inconsequential throwaway character detail that lends depth to writing, and it made me stop and think "You know what? He probably is, too." and actually brain it out for a few minutes.
Title: Hi, Mum 27 Feb 2010 4:26 pm
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    Very well done! I particularly like how him being rescued by Severus isn't an instant cure for years of abuse.

    And I think you've done a great job in keeping Snape's character true to the books, but his reactions to Harry changed just enough due to his recognition of what has been happening to Harry over the years since Lily and James' deaths.

    I look forward to reading more of your writing!
Title: Hi, Mum 13 Nov 2009 1:38 pm
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    This was just all so gorgeous, the first few were heartbreaking and so detailed it was sort of sickening (which is a good thing... I think ^^) and the last few were the best bits of fluff I've read in ages, the last line absolutely perfect. Thanks so much for that, I love your work ^^
    have fun x
Title: Hi, Mum 30 May 2009 8:21 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    There's still a lump in my throat... I think I need to go and leave a tear-stain on someone's shoulder. Very emotional story.
Title: A flicker of hope 27 Apr 2009 8:18 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I really love the way that you've ended it too.

    I know that I keep harping on it, but I really love your descriptions. Well done.
Title: Hi, Mum 27 Apr 2009 8:04 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, it's finished?

    Whatever you have planned after this, I'm really anxious to read. Again, I really like your descriptions and how you write your characters.
Title: Breakfast 27 Apr 2009 8:01 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, Snape's a vegetarian like me. LOL!

    I always knew that we'd make a perfect couple. Don't tell him I said that though.

    Harry thinks that he still has to sleep in the closet, poor sweetie. But tall, dark and mysterious Sev is going to take care of the poor thing.

    I really like your writing style, and I'm glad that I've a few chapters to read at a time, although, I'm sorry if I've missed them before. Or perhaps you just posted them all together, or maybe it's the problem with the updates. Nevertheless, great chapter again.

    Author's Response:

    I just posted them all at once -- the three last ones, anyway. They're so short and I normally like to write longer fics. But I'm really glad you liked tham all! =)

    Vegetarian!Snape just sort of happened. And you can keep "harping" about how much you like my descriptions. Feeds my ego very well, it does ;) As for more parts.... Well, the thing is, there is more. It's just not Snape and Harry who're in focus there -- not as much anyway. Also, I haven't posted it yet. It will probably be on my LJ. There'll be slash, because I like it, but not between Harry and Snape *god no*. Charlie Weasley comes to mind.

    Thank you for your lovely reviews ^_^

    http://sa-kun.livejournal.com/25995.html#cutid1 -- that's where my challenge table is. And no I've rambled wnough ^^;; Ta.

Title: "I have a bed here" II 27 Apr 2009 7:48 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow! How come I missed all these chapters. This story is wonderful. I really love how you have Severus finally see that Harry is abused.

    I love too that he is giving a part of himself to Harry by speaking of Lily. I'm sure that that can't be easy for Severus.

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