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Reviews For Hello, Magic
i have tears in my eys. its sp sweet and sad at the same time. i love this story!!!
However, the thing I loved most, and this is kind of weird, is Severus being vegetarian. It's that kind of seemingly inconsequential throwaway character detail that lends depth to writing, and it made me stop and think "You know what? He probably is, too." and actually brain it out for a few minutes.
And I think you've done a great job in keeping Snape's character true to the books, but his reactions to Harry changed just enough due to his recognition of what has been happening to Harry over the years since Lily and James' deaths. I look forward to reading more of your writing!
have fun x
I know that I keep harping on it, but I really love your descriptions. Well done.
Whatever you have planned after this, I'm really anxious to read. Again, I really like your descriptions and how you write your characters.
I always knew that we'd make a perfect couple. Don't tell him I said that though. Harry thinks that he still has to sleep in the closet, poor sweetie. But tall, dark and mysterious Sev is going to take care of the poor thing. I really like your writing style, and I'm glad that I've a few chapters to read at a time, although, I'm sorry if I've missed them before. Or perhaps you just posted them all together, or maybe it's the problem with the updates. Nevertheless, great chapter again. Author's Response: I just posted them all at once -- the three last ones, anyway. They're so short and I normally like to write longer fics. But I'm really glad you liked tham all! =) Vegetarian!Snape just sort of happened. And you can keep "harping" about how much you like my descriptions. Feeds my ego very well, it does ;) As for more parts.... Well, the thing is, there is more. It's just not Snape and Harry who're in focus there -- not as much anyway. Also, I haven't posted it yet. It will probably be on my LJ. There'll be slash, because I like it, but not between Harry and Snape *god no*. Charlie Weasley comes to mind. Thank you for your lovely reviews ^_^ http://sa-kun.livejournal.com/25995.html#cutid1 -- that's where my challenge table is. And no I've rambled wnough ^^;; Ta.
I love too that he is giving a part of himself to Harry by speaking of Lily. I'm sure that that can't be easy for Severus. |
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