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Reviews For Hello, Magic
This is really good! I wanna read more!!!
bye M
Author's Response: Duly noted. Glad you like it ^^ ...and now I have to go and look up what an OCD complex is. Damn you ;) Forcing resaerch on me... =)
Author's Response: Thank you. Hmm... I think I may have to update the summary. It's supposed to be "snippets" only.
I like your writing style and the way you are handling the characterizations in this story. Need I tell you that ever time I read the words "I have a bed here," it hits me like a ton of bricks. I look forward to reading more of your work. Author's Response: Acknowledged. ;) Thank you. And, yes, of course you need to tell me; how else am I supposed to know? As a writer, I'm ridiculously insecure. In real life, however...
Author's Response: I shall, I shall! lol
I don't like Draco Malfoy so much either! I do like a Harry with backbone too, but you have not made him weak, only sweet! ;) Love it! Please please update it!
I'm hoping Harry gets more spunky later on, as that would be fun, but your Harry at the moment is really cute, so either way would be enjoyable. Good luck with those chapters! Author's Response: Thank you! =) More spunky? Meh, I'm such a lousy judge of character... He grows up! That much I know ;) Can't stay a kid forver, now can he?
Author's Response: I'll let you in on a secret, m'kay? I suck at being coherent ;) But the italic was a quote from a review. I think, at most, I mention him. Either way, he's --not-- a main character. I don't think he even qualifies as a bystander... |
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