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Title: "I have a bed here" III 26 Oct 2008 12:06 am
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    POST POST POST POST POST!!!!
    This is really good! I wanna read more!!!
Title: "I have a bed here" III 22 Oct 2008 9:59 pm
Reviewer: maloanne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just discovered the storie : I loved it and hope you update soon. I like how Snape react with Harry.
    bye
    M
Title: "I have a bed here" III 21 Oct 2008 1:05 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay I'm pestering. Please post some more. I realy like this and I'm glad you're showing poor Harry as a kind of OCD complex. It makes sense, considering how he was raised.

    Author's Response:

    Duly noted. Glad you like it ^^ 

    ...and now I have to go and look up what an OCD complex is. Damn you ;) Forcing resaerch on me... =)

Title: "I have a bed here" III 20 Oct 2008 9:50 pm
Reviewer: Gem (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a really good story, but have you skipped about a bit - no flying or friends or academics?

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. 

    Hmm... I think I may have to update the summary. It's supposed to be "snippets" only.

Title: "I have a bed here" III 20 Oct 2008 8:51 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Consider yourself pestered.

    I like your writing style and the way you are handling the characterizations in this story. Need I tell you that ever time I read the words "I have a bed here," it hits me like a ton of bricks.

    I look forward to reading more of your work.

    Author's Response:

    Acknowledged. ;)

    Thank you. And, yes, of course you need to tell me; how else am I supposed to know? As a writer, I'm ridiculously insecure. In real life, however...  

Title: "I have a bed here" III 20 Oct 2008 6:34 am
Reviewer: Slythami (Signed) [Report This]
    What do you mean "chapters that are, basically, already written" WHAT? lol. POST PLEASE!

    Author's Response: I shall, I shall! lol
Title: "I have a bed here" III 20 Oct 2008 4:10 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    OK, so I'm pestering you to write those wonderful chapters that you have already written.

    I don't like Draco Malfoy so much either! I do like a Harry with backbone too, but you have not made him weak, only sweet! ;)

    Love it! Please please update it!
Title: "I have a bed here" III 20 Oct 2008 1:43 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Draco is a prat. And since Harry wasn't sitting with anyone else on the train, he never met Ron or Hermione. I see a very lonely school stay for Harry.
Title: "I have a bed here" III 20 Oct 2008 12:56 am
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    Chapters that are already written? heh, I do that too! I'm really really happy about the double whammy you've just posted; they're really great chapters, quite deep and really move the plotline forward in a very promising way.
    I'm hoping Harry gets more spunky later on, as that would be fun, but your Harry at the moment is really cute, so either way would be enjoyable. Good luck with those chapters!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! =)

    More spunky? Meh, I'm such a lousy judge of character... He grows up! That much I know ;) Can't stay a kid forver, now can he?

Title: "I have a bed here" III 20 Oct 2008 12:48 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    lol... that last comment didn't make a lot of sense (in your A/N) but i know what you're getting at. I don't like Draco Malfoy either. Please don't add him into the story. That always ruins the whole thing for me, no matter how much I like it before that. Often I stop reading them when Draco enters the picture. NOW POST!!!!!!

    Author's Response:

    I'll let you in on a secret, m'kay? I suck at being coherent ;) But the italic was a quote from a review.

    I think, at most, I mention him. Either way, he's --not-- a main character. I don't think he even qualifies as a bystander...


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