I really like the way you portray Severus! Oh, gave me the laughs. What is it on Harry's feet?
OK I so love the inner voices arguing. It's awesome!
The scene where Severus' thoughts about having to make sure the children get onto the Hogwarts Express is wonderful. Yes, it is good to be appreciated!
HAhahahah....this is totally awesome, Snape's inner voices talking like he has MPD or sth...love it!
Read it again,great start, especially the inner monologue of Severus.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 11 Mar 2009 7:30 am
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| Reviewer: FS (Anonymous)
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Interesting. Your Severus is a bit soft, but as long as he has a reason to be, I think this will be good. I'm guessing that Harry reminds him of himself at that age? Anyway, good start. I look forward to reading more.
-P.G.
good start.
Author's Response: Thank you!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 28 Sep 2008 7:56 am
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| Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous)
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Oh poor mixed up Sev,(giggle) I love your sense of houmor,great job!
Author's Response: Thank you, Thank you, thank you. I hope to keep you reading till the end. Your comment means so much to me!
Well, that was different but I like it! Now I have to read the next chapter to see why Snape asked Harry what he was wearing on his feet. Fuzzy slippers come to mind, LOL!
Author's Response: Lol. Fuzzy slippers. Thanks so much for reading!!!
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