Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 3 27 Sep 2017 6:59 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I loved it! Your writing style is just so awesome! I truly loved it. I have only seen two authors with your writing style. One is you and the other is Anthezar. Oh, how I love it, absolutely love it. I love Snape's POV. Its so funny!
Title: Chapter 3 16 May 2016 12:30 am
Reviewer: LBibliophile (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the way you have written Severus' inner voices. And the fact that Snape of all people has a Hermione-voice (not to mention the Ron one)... :P
Title: Chapter 3 26 Jun 2015 2:28 am
Reviewer: Pug Mom 10 (Signed) [Report This]
    just love severus's personality!!
Title: Chapter 3 30 Jan 2013 4:48 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh gosh, this is precisely the reason I love Severus so much!
Title: Chapter 3 21 Oct 2011 6:44 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    LOVED IT loveingthis story
Title: Chapter 3 11 Mar 2009 7:50 am
Reviewer: FS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You're a great writer, but I find the dialogue within Severus's head really distracting--you know, the Two and Three. I don't think you need that. It is confusing and distracting and hard to follow.
Title: Chapter 3 14 Oct 2008 1:45 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 3 06 Oct 2008 1:40 am
Reviewer: Aiwendil (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey!
    Although I find the sudden change in the Durley's behaviour startling and surprising, I'm sure that once Harry is better, we're going to get some kind of explanation, however ridiculous it's going to be...
    That said...
    I liked it so far and am hoping for more, although I have to admit that I find schizophrenic Snape a bit disconcerning...
    Thanks,
    ai

    Author's Response: Lol. He's not schizophrenic, he's just got weird voices in his head. And, yes, the Durselys will be further explained, soon, as soon as I get this next chapter up. Thanks for reviewing!! I'm so glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 3 30 Sep 2008 4:09 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the way Sev told off that dumb Ministry official! It was priceless!

    And Minerva really deserves to have a good laugh over it too! I hope that Albus realizes what he has done by leaving Harry in the Dursleys care once he sees the memories Sev shows him.

    I also loved the part with Harry feeling warm and safe in Severus's quarters. Aww!

    Author's Response: Well, i thought LAbus was going to be Albys in this fic, but apparently he's not.....YIKES!!! I hope no one barfs over the non-nice Dumbledore......this is AU, after all......
Title: Chapter 3 29 Sep 2008 5:16 am
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! I love the way you manage to mix humour and angst and get it to blend together perfectly! Otherwise the anguish would be hard to bear - but this way it's just remarkable!
    I love Snape's "split-up" personality and the conversations he has with himself - they are both entertaining and right to the point. That way you manage to convey the difficult and different traits that make up our beloved potions master. He is, after all, even in the books, the most interesting character because he isn't easy to understand and does seem to act ambiguously all the time!
    I'm eager to see how you'll have the doddering old fool react to the memories. I dearly hope for his own sake that he will - for once - behave like a responsible adult or I'll have to agree with the High inquisitor on one account: There are some very irresposible things going on at Hogwarts set from a pedagogical point of view... Keep up the good work - I really love it so far!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! really don't know what to say, but I never realized I was doing all that. Thanks anyway though.

    Yes, yes, I figured we needed to know why he was so cranky all the time. Tiurns out its because his voices won't gove him a minute of peace. Sad, but great for reading!

    Well.........I'm torn between him thinking its a hoax....or being completely devastated...Either way, Sev's gonna take a huge bite out of him. :)

    Thanks again!! 


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