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Title: Chapter 3 28 Sep 2008 10:56 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed it! I especially liked the part where Harry woke up in Severus' arms, how he'd never experienced that before, and how it made him feel safe and protected.

    The conversation with the Severus' inner voices was interesting, and I could understand why Minerva had such a strong reaction when Severus told off the Ministry official...I hope he's not going to be another Umbridge, but at least Harry has Severus on his side this time if the Ministry causes him any trouble.

    And so Harry was awake and knows that Severus carried him inside and put him to bed...I'm glad Harry knows.

    I'm looking forward to more!

    Author's Response:

    Yup yup. I thought it was essential for Harry to know this, considering Severus isn't the touchy-feely kind of person, so any kinds of hugs would be a rare occurence.

    Thanks so much, and jhe's not going to be as bad as Umbridge, really, but I needed a villain....

    Hope to have more up soon!! 

Title: Chapter 3 28 Sep 2008 10:31 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like it.

    It is very rare to find a story where Severus is immediately soft-hearted toward Harry and I enjoy that greatly. Althoug, I can see, that Ron and Hermione are greatly in love. /Please/ don't make this a Harry/Ginny fic. I hate the little redhead.

    Now I have a question: Is Severus an Animagus in this story?

    Update soon.

    Yours,
    Lady Julie Snape.

    Author's Response:

    Lol. I too got really tired of all the fics where Snape has to go through this whole song and dance routine before eh realizes that Harry isn't everything he thought he was. Believe me, as much as I love Sev-adopts-Harry fics, the recurring theme was really getting to me. THe only ones that really seem to start off like this one are the baby fics, as even when Harry's deaged Sev's still a bit of a grump.

     

    Lol. You hate her? How come? And, I haven't really gotten around to thinking of relationships for Harry, girlfriend-wise. I think now that I have to think about it, that it may be Luna, and then only because of that one scene in the  OotP movie where she's out in the woods feeding thresthrals... did I spell that right?

     

    And, yes, Sevie is an Animagus, But I'm having trouble deciding what his form is. I've read fics where he's everything from a bat to a dragon to a snake, all very predictable, though well done. But, I'mm working on i, really, I am.

    I'll try to update sometime this week, really.

    Thanks so much!! 

Title: Chapter 3 28 Sep 2008 6:22 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I just started reading this and it is very interesting. I love the little voices in Severus' head. With all the things he had going on, it is amazing that Severus didn't become unhinged.

    Author's Response: Well, that's only correct if you dont consider that because he's hearing voices he actually is unhinged....... but that wouldn't be as much fun, I'm sure. Thanks so much for the review!!!
Title: Chapter 3 28 Sep 2008 5:41 pm
Reviewer: Brandy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice!!! It's so sweet reading about Snape's feelings about Harry, and hilarious about the high inquisitor! Can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response:

    lol Thanks so much! I won't keep you waiting too long, hopefully

     

Title: Chapter 3 28 Sep 2008 5:11 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Hated it, how can you even think anyone would hate this. It is brilliant!

    I especially love your character's development. You really have a knack for making us feel their emotions, and might I mention also, that I was constantly alternating between tears and laughter.

    You have given us a whole new insight into the workings of Severus Snape's mind. I love it. Wow, he's so tall, 6'5'', that little guy must have been ready to pee his pants!

    Please update soon, I have a feeling that your story is going to be one of my favourites!

    Author's Response:

    Oh WOW. Oh My Goodness. Thank you so MUCH!!! I LOVE that you love this, especially since I was so iffy about it.

     

    I have a knack for making you feel emotions? Lol, I like to think I have a knack for expressing insanity, but that works too.

     

    Lol! Thanks so much!! Hope to hear from you again soon!!!! 

Title: Chapter 3 28 Sep 2008 2:53 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, very good! I liked Minerva having a laughing fit!

    Keep on!

    Author's Response: Lol. I'm so glad no one thought it was too off. I'll try!!
Title: Chapter 3 28 Sep 2008 10:18 am
Reviewer: Twinheart (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic! I enjoyed the interactions with Albus, Minerva and Severus - as well as Snape's verbal destruction of the ministry toady.

    Author's Response: :D :D :D You're comment so made me grin. Thanks so much!
Title: Chapter 3 28 Sep 2008 9:35 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice move with the MoM stooge.

    Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Title: Chapter 3 28 Sep 2008 8:20 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderful, must have MORE!

    Author's Response:

    lol. Thanks! You'll have to wait a while, love, but I'll try not to keep you waiting too long, k?

     

Title: Chapter 3 28 Sep 2008 8:12 am
Reviewer: kyzhart (Signed) [Report This]
    Go Sev! Woohoo. Keep it comin!

    Author's Response: Lol. You liked it? I'm still kind of iffy about it. Thanks though!!!

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