Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 4 18 Oct 2008 9:58 pm
Reviewer: Isabelle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I REALLY like it and look forward the next chapters

    Author's Response: Thank you! And I'll try not to keep you waiting for too much longer!
Title: Chapter 4 16 Oct 2008 6:37 am
Reviewer: Muggle49 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great, looking forward to your next contribution.

    Author's Response: Thanks a bunch. I'll try to have it up as soon as its betaed!
Title: Chapter 4 14 Oct 2008 2:02 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how Snape interacted with Dumbledore!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 4 13 Oct 2008 3:04 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, Sev tell that man where to get off! I'm glad harry has Sev looking after him. Te breakfst was funny. Some teenagers, aka my nephews eat like ten people.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!!! I'm so glad you liked it. I was wondering if it wouldn't be enough......

    I have two kid brothers, and they already eat more than I do. I'm dreading puberty, believe me. 

Title: Chapter 4 13 Oct 2008 7:47 am
Reviewer: skrwt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Liked the sev-harry. Lot of little mysteries building up around Harry, I"m intrigued!

    Dumbledore is confusing me... can't really get a handle on his character so far. It sounds like severus thinks Dumbledore has suddenly changed from how he used to be - a curse maybe? it kind of reminds me of one fic I read where Dumbledore was actually Grindelwald in disguise but the timing's all wrong.

    Author's Response: Weeeelllllll....It isn't a curse, that much I can tell you. This is the vanquisher of Grindenwald we're seeing, the Dumbledore reveied to us in DH, but without the change of heart. Hope that explains it enough for ya!
Title: Chapter 4 13 Oct 2008 7:45 am
Reviewer: le skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Liked the sev-harry. Lot of little mysteries building up around Harry, I"m intrigued!

    Dumbledore is confusing me... can't really get a handle on his character so far.

    Author's Response: Dumbles is supposed to be a bit off. I'm so gld you liked Sev and Harry. More of them in the next chapter, and a little bit of Draco too......
Title: Chapter 4 13 Oct 2008 7:13 am
Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like the way you write Severus and Harry interacting,thanls for the update.

    Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! I'll have another update up soon, I'm just waiting for it to be betaed.
Title: Chapter 4 13 Oct 2008 12:27 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I really loved this chapter! You wrote the tension between Dumbledore and Severus very well, and if anyone is a match for Dumbledore, it's Severus. I'm so glad that he's so determined to help Harry and to take guardianship. Harry needs Severus on his side.

    And the scene with Harry and Severus is wonderful. Harry really is powerful, isn't he? I can't wait to read the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!!!! I was so worried about the scene with Sev and Dumbles! And, of course they're going to but heads soon. And Harry can hold his own, though he doesn't yet know it.

    I'm so glad that scene was ok. I was afraid they both would seem too OOC, with Sev beng nice and Hary being respectful.... I'll try to have another one up very soon!!! 

Title: Chapter 4 12 Oct 2008 5:32 pm
Reviewer: ankita (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hey why wd u expect ppl to hate it...its good
Title: Chapter 4 12 Oct 2008 7:15 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like your story.

    Snape is perhaps alittle OOC, but that's OK. You made it clear that he has been rethinking his thoughts about Harry for the past couple of years, so his feelings now make sense.
    I am wondering why Dumbledore is not more caring.
    Please keep writing.

    Author's Response: Thank you! Dumbledore is a mystery.....He's disappointed. I'll have another chapter up very soon, I assure you!!

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