Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 4 12 Oct 2008 4:59 am
Reviewer: Twinheart (Signed) [Report This]
    Very original and skilful. Sharp writing and crisp, well-developed characters. A true pleasure to read. Well done!

    Author's Response: Wow. Thank you! Thank you so very much!!!
Title: Chapter 4 12 Oct 2008 4:54 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it. Really. I don't know if Dumbledore was out of character or not. And it really didn't matter. The way you wrote him made the perfect foil for Severus. Wandless and silent magic,huh? Sev's certainly going to have his hands full teaching Harry, won't he? Last but not least, I loved the last paragraph. That was a great place to end the chapter.

    Author's Response: I feel so warm and fuzzy right now. Thanks so much for your review!! I'm so glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 4 12 Oct 2008 3:24 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    I respectfully submit to you that Severus is nothing if not elegantly efficient in his speech. It both fits his character AND scans better, if he were to end this sentence thus: "There were enough images of downright torture to upset even you, the Ultimate Optimist.”

    Good chapter!

    Author's Response: Yay!!! Thank you so very much. I was afraid Sev was a bit mild in his rant...and I guess not! I'll have another update up as soon as I can. Thanks again!!
Title: Chapter 4 12 Oct 2008 2:58 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love it, update soon.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I  will, soon.
Title: Chapter 4 12 Oct 2008 1:53 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    i loved it and i truely hope severus gets guardianship of harry, severus should place a spell on dumbles so that he can't interfere. the way dumbles acted sent shivers down my spine

    Author's Response:

    Hmmm.....A apell....Now there's a thought......

    Thanks so much, I'm so glad you liked it!! Of course Severus will get Guardianship of Harry. And yes, Dumbles is a bit off....and I have no idea why....

    Thanks again. I'll try to post soon!!! 

Title: Chapter 4 11 Oct 2008 11:58 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Very sweet, very nice. Snape's getting hooked!

    I like your humour, and your writing style. Can't wait to see where the relationship is going. It is apparant that Snape is finally beginning to see Harry for who he is, not as a James Potter lookalike.

    Author's Response: YES!! Don't you think It's about time?? Lol. I'm so glad you liked it. I'll try to have another chapter up very soon, k? Thanks again!!!
Title: Chapter 4 11 Oct 2008 11:57 pm
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like this story! Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Yay!! Thakns so much! I'll have more up as son as I can. Thanks again!!
Title: Chapter 4 11 Oct 2008 11:49 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ::blushes deeply::

    My dear, I apologize!

    I have been so busy with the real world that I did not have time to beta your chapter. You must hate me now. Everytime I sat down to read it, something came up. And I just spend all of today at my cousin's helping her paint! Again, I'm so, so sorry.

    Your portrayal of Dumbledore wasn't too bad. I love when Severus gets angry at him though - it's so much fun reading Dumbledore bashing.

    Care to give me a second chance?

    Update soon, my dear.

    Yours,
    Lady Julie Snape.

    Author's Response:

    Awww! It's ok. I know how it is when Life just ups and throws you a bunch of stuff to do at once. Believe me, the only reason I got this chapter up is because i wrote and rewrote while sitting at my register at work. Of course I'll give you another chance!

    My Dumbles didn't bite? Or, at least, not completely? I have NO idea where he came from...... It took me forever to edit it this far.

     Thanks SO much for the review!!!


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